Machine— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致，避免拼写错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because I dislike the unpleasant smell caused by leftover food mixed with detergent. It makes me feel quite uncomfortable and irritated.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和冠词的使用，使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I think they are important because many people live a fast-paced life, so saving time is crucial. Washing machines and sweeping machines help us a lot in our daily lives.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和句子连贯性，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

Exemplo: No, I usually don't read instructions because I am familiar with many machines and use my common sense. However, if I don't know how to use a machine, I watch tutorial videos online.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但用词不够准确，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和更连贯的句子结构。

Exemplo: I think it's important to read the instructions because they tell you what not to do and how to use the machine properly. However, I find reading all the text troublesome, so I prefer watching online tutorials.

× It make me feel quite disgusted and I also hate the uncomfortable sensitization it creates.

✓ It makes me feel quite disgusted and I also hate the uncomfortable sensitization it creates.

主语是单数第三人称单数"It"，谓语动词应加-s，变为"makes"。

× Yes, I think so, because nowadays a lot of people living in a rapid paced life, saving time seems very crucial and washing machines and sweeping machines can help us a lot on our daily life.

✓ Yes, I think so, because nowadays a lot of people live a rapid-paced life. Saving time seems very crucial, and washing machines and sweeping machines can help us a lot in our daily life.

句子缺少谓语动词，"a lot of people living"应改为"a lot of people live"。此外，句子过长，建议分句，且"on our daily life"应改为"in our daily life"。

× When it comes to this machine that I'm not familiar with, I will just watching tutorial lessons online.

✓ When it comes to this machine that I'm not familiar with, I will just watch tutorial lessons online.

情态动词"will"后应接动词原形，不能用动名词"watching"。

× saving time seems very crucial and washing machines and sweeping machines can help us a lot on our daily life.

✓ saving time seems very crucial and washing machines and sweeping machines can help us a lot in our daily life.

介词"on"用法错误，表示在某个时间或地点时应使用"in"，此处应为"in our daily life"。

× No, I never read any instructions before I use a machine because most of time I am familiar with a lot of machines that I will use my common sense.

✓ No, I never read any instructions before I use a machine because most of the time I am familiar with a lot of machines and I will use my common sense.

缺少冠词"the"，且连接词使用不当，"that"应改为"and"连接两个并列句。