Machine— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Candidato
Well, in my home, it's definitely the washing machine. You know, I, I think it's really saved my time and effort. I don't like to wash clothes by hand because I think the water is so cold. And I didn't like that way because I'm such a lazy girl.
Examinador
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Candidato
Yes, for me, I think so. Hmm. You know, it's a very high tech devices that really help me and changed our lifestyle and you know, to save money, save time and effort and really give me and my family a hand.
Examinador
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Candidato
Well, sometimes yes, especially that I meet the situation that I can't character use this machine. I will read it because it's more help me to understand it clearly. So I think it's necessary to read it before.
Examinador
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Candidato
Well, I think it's really depends. You know, for some basic things like the fan and on our mobile phone, I don't think it's necessary because we can always go the right way. But some high taxes seem like the computer we really need to read before.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答时有重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议避免重复词汇，使用更准确的时态和表达方式，且回答应更简洁流畅。
Exemplo: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I dislike washing clothes by hand, especially when the water is cold, so this machine is very convenient for me.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用正确的单复数形式，避免口语填充词，使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I believe washing and sweeping machines are very important because they are high-tech devices that have changed our lifestyle. They help save time, effort, and even money, making daily chores easier for my family and me.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法和词汇表达观点。
Exemplo: Sometimes I read the instructions, especially when I don't know how to use a machine. Reading the manual helps me understand it better, so I think it's necessary to do so before using new devices.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致，避免口语化表达，使用准确词汇并组织逻辑清晰的句子。
Exemplo: I think it depends. For simple devices like fans or mobile phones, reading instructions may not be necessary because they are easy to use. However, for complex devices like computers, it is important to read the instructions beforehand.
Gramática
× it's a very high tech devices that really help me and changed our lifestyle
✓ it's a very high tech device that really helps me and changes our lifestyle
devices是复数形式，但前面用的是单数的it's，应该用单数device。动词help和changed也要与单数主语一致，改为helps和changes。
× changed our lifestyle
✓ changes our lifestyle
句子描述的是现在的情况，应该用一般现在时，changed是过去式，应改为changes。
× I can't character use this machine
✓ I can't correctly use this machine
character用法错误，应该用副词correctly修饰动词use。
× it's more help me to understand it clearly
✓ it helps me more to understand it clearly
原句中more位置错误，且缺少动词helps，应该调整为it helps me more。
× I think it's really depends
✓ I think it really depends
动词depends前不需要助动词is，应该直接用it really depends。
× some high taxes seem like the computer
✓ some high techs seem like the computer
taxes（税）用错，应该是tech（技术），且tech是不可数名词，改为some high tech devices或some high tech products更合适。
× we can always go the right way
✓ we can always go the right way
此句中缺少介词to，正确表达应为we can always go the right way。
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