Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
Yes, I am. I have to admit that being good at memorizing is one of my talents. I have always been good at memorizing vocabulary, grammar, and historical events, and for this reason, when I was in school, I was often praised by my teachers.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
Yes, absolutely I have. And I think that everybody has ever forgotten something important. For me, one of the important things I have forgotten is, uh, it's that I have forgotten my mother's birthday last year.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
Well, I am a teacher and I work in a school, so I have a lot of things to remember in my daily life. For example, I have to remember my students names and their schools in the examination. Additionally, I have to remember what I have to teach in my next lesson.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
Yes, I do have some approaches to help me remember some important things. For example, first I would like to use my smartphone as a reminder. Additionally, I always write some important things in a list.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 85.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但句子较长且部分表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更简洁流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember vocabulary and historical dates, which helped me get praise from my teachers at school.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答中有口头语“uh”，影响流畅度。内容重复且表达不够简洁。建议减少口头语，直接回答问题，并用连词使句子更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I forgot my mother's birthday last year, which made me feel very sorry.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 88.0Sugestão: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但部分表达略显重复。建议使用更多连接词丰富句子结构，使表达更自然。
Exemplo: As a teacher, I need to remember many things daily. For example, I must recall my students' names and their exam schools, and also plan what to teach in the next lesson.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答中“would like to”用法不当，显得不自然。建议使用更直接的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: I use a few methods to remember important things. For example, I set reminders on my smartphone and write important tasks in a list.
Gramática
× it's that I have forgotten my mother's birthday last year.
✓ it's that I forgot my mother's birthday last year.
这里的时间状语是“last year”，表示过去的时间，应该使用一般过去时，而不是现在完成时。将“have forgotten”改为“forgot”符合过去时间的表达。
× I have to remember my students names and their schools in the examination.
✓ I have to remember my students' names and their schools in the examination.
“students names”缺少所有格形式，表示“学生们的名字”，应加撇号变为“students' names”。这是复数所有格的正确用法。
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