Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but lacks natural phrasing and has grammatical errors. Try to use complete sentences and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, be more specific and concise. For example, say 'No, I'm not very good at memorising things. My friends often remind me about important events because I tend to forget them.'

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. My friends often remind me about important events because I tend to forget them.

Sugestão: Your answer provides examples but has repetition and grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words like 'easily' and use correct verb forms. Also, link your ideas smoothly. For example, 'Yes, I sometimes forget important things. For instance, I have forgotten exam dates and even my mobile phone and wallet when going out, which makes me feel confused.'

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget important things. For instance, I have forgotten exam dates and even my mobile phone and wallet when going out, which makes me feel confused.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Be clear and concise, and avoid unnecessary details. For example, say 'I need to remember my study schedule and lesson dates because they are important for my learning.'

Exemplo: I need to remember my study schedule and lesson dates because they are important for my learning.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'some Canada'. Try to clearly explain your method using simple and correct language. For example, 'I use a calendar and daily schedule to organise my tasks. This helps me stay efficient and ensures I don't forget urgent or important things.'

Exemplo: I use a calendar and daily schedule to organise my tasks. This helps me stay efficient and ensures I don't forget urgent or important things.

× No I don't. My friend always told me I am easily forget something that is very important so they always umm remind me when some important time.

✓ No, I don't. My friend always tells me I easily forget something that is very important, so they always remind me at important times.

The pronoun 'I' should be followed by 'easily forget' without 'am' because 'forget' is a verb here, not an adjective. Also, 'they' refers to 'my friend' which is singular, so 'they' should be 'he' or 'she' or 'my friends' if plural. The phrase 'when some important time' is incorrect; it should be 'at important times'. Use present tense 'tells' to match habitual action.

× My friend always told me I am easily forget something that is very important so they always umm remind me when some important time.

✓ My friend always tells me I easily forget something that is very important, so they always remind me at important times.

The verb 'told' is past tense but the context is habitual, so present tense 'tells' is appropriate. Consistency in tense is important for clarity.

× Yes, sometime I will easily forgot some important things easily.

✓ Yes, sometimes I easily forget some important things.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Will easily forgot' is incorrect; 'forgot' is past tense but 'will' requires base verb 'forget'. The correct form is 'I easily forget' for present habitual action.

× For example I'll forget the exam date and when I'm hanging up I will forget to bring my mobile and wallet.

✓ For example, I'll forget the exam date, and when I'm going out, I will forget to bring my mobile and wallet.

The phrase 'hanging up' is incorrect in this context; 'going out' is appropriate for leaving the house. Also, a comma is needed after 'For example' for clarity.

× That always make me feel confused.

✓ That always makes me feel confused.

The subject 'That' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number.

× I think I need to remember my study schedule and study plan when I'm studying because it's quite important for me to remember the date when I'm going to have a lesson and when I'm going to having a crease.

✓ I think I need to remember my study schedule and study plan when I'm studying because it's quite important for me to remember the date when I'm going to have a lesson and when I'm going to have a class.

The phrase 'going to having a crease' is incorrect; it should be 'going to have a class'. 'Having' should be in base form after 'going to' for future tense.

× That's quite important for my 30 January.

✓ That's quite important for my 30th of January.

Dates require ordinal numbers and the preposition 'of' before the month for correct English usage.

× I will use some Canada and some schedule list for a day.

✓ I will use a calendar and a schedule list for the day.

'Canada' is incorrect; likely meant 'calendar'. Also, 'some schedule list' should be 'a schedule list'. Articles and word choice are important here.

× It makes me more efficient of a day and I can make sure that I do anything important that is urgent and importantly I can do my make my.

✓ It makes my day more efficient, and I can make sure that I do anything important and urgent. Importantly, I can complete my tasks.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrases like 'more efficient of a day' and 'do my make my'. These are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.