Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to make your response more natural by avoiding redundancy and structuring your sentences clearly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because it helps me stay organised and manage my daily routine effectively. For instance, remembering appointments and tasks allows me to maintain a balanced lifestyle.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct sentence structures. Explain the situation with specific details and use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially when I am very excited or distracted. For example, during stressful times, I sometimes forget appointments because my mind is not focused.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but needs clearer sentence structure and better vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be specific about your habits and explain why they are important.

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily routine, which I have been following for the past two years to maintain good health. For example, I exercise every day and eat nutritious meals to keep my body fit.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about the app's features.

Exemplo: I use the reminder app on my iPhone to remember important tasks. It helps me stay organised by sending notifications and allowing me to set priorities for each task.

× I'm a very good at memorizing things because it helps me to remind everything, to maintain my life, to maintain my routine.

✓ I'm very good at memorizing things because it helps me to remember everything, to maintain my life, to maintain my routine.

The phrase 'a very good' is incorrect because 'good' is an adjective and does not require the article 'a' before it. Also, 'remind everything' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember' when referring to recalling information. So, 'I'm very good at memorizing things' and 'it helps me to remember everything' are correct.

× It's very helpful for me to memorize all small things and have advantages because they're helpful for me and my life.

✓ It's very helpful for me to memorize all small things and have advantages because they are helpful for me and my life.

The contraction 'they're' is acceptable but in formal speech, expanding to 'they are' is clearer. However, the main issue is the awkward phrasing 'have advantages'. It would be better to say 'because they help me and my life.' But since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, the correction focuses on pronoun clarity.

× When I was in my hyper mood I forgot everything was important because in my hypermode behaviour I forgot everything.

✓ When I was in my hyper mood, I forgot everything that was important because in my hypermode behaviour I forgot everything.

The sentence lacks the relative pronoun 'that' to connect 'everything' and 'was important'. Adding 'that' clarifies the meaning. Also, a comma after 'mood' improves readability. The past tense 'forgot' is correct here.

× I can't stable and it's never helpful for me.

✓ I can't stay stable and it's never helpful for me.

The word 'stable' is an adjective and cannot be used as a verb here. The correct verb is 'stay stable' meaning to remain steady. So, 'I can't stay stable' is the correct form.

× I really need to remember my daily routine was I'm following from last two years and I maintained for my body for my good habits.

✓ I really need to remember my daily routine that I've been following for the last two years and I maintain for my body good habits.

The phrase 'was I'm following' is incorrect; it should be 'that I've been following' to indicate a continuous action from the past to present. Also, 'maintained for my body for my good habits' is awkward; 'maintain good habits for my body' is better. The preposition 'for' is used incorrectly and should be adjusted accordingly.

× For example daily I'm going daily for workout and having a good meal for my health.

✓ For example, daily I'm going for a workout and having a good meal for my health.

The phrase 'going daily for workout' is incorrect; it should be 'going for a workout daily' or 'going for a workout'. Also, 'for workout' needs the article 'a' before 'workout'. The preposition 'for' before 'my health' is correct.

× I remember important things by using a reminder app which is in iPhone because it is very helpful for me to remind me each and everything and maintain my routine.

✓ I remember important things by using a reminder app on my iPhone because it is very helpful for me to remind me of each and everything and maintain my routine.

The phrase 'which is in iPhone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on my iPhone'. Also, 'remind me each and everything' should be 'remind me of each and everything' to be grammatically correct.

× Very helpful app is that and it's provide me a lot of functions that helps me to remember.

✓ That app is very helpful and it provides me with a lot of functions that help me to remember.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'Very helpful app is that' should be 'That app is very helpful'. Also, 'it's provide' should be 'it provides' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'Helps me' should be 'help me' because the subject is 'functions' (plural).