Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了自信，但句子结构有些复杂且存在语法错误。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持。注意单复数和冠词的使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I am learning different languages. For example, I often remember new vocabulary by repeating them several times.

Sugestão: 你的回答内容具体且有条理，但开头的表达稍显复杂。建议直接开门见山，使用连接词使叙述更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important exam during my second year at university. I thought it was on Monday, but it was actually on Saturday morning, so I missed it and had to retake the course.

Sugestão: 回答内容具体，但语法和表达有些不自然。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. However, the most important is the appointments my students make with me. If I miss them, it will harm my reputation as a teacher.

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了方法，但句子结构稍显冗长。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意表达的自然性。

Exemplo: I usually make daily lists on my phone's calendar. It helps me remember important tasks and reminds me five minutes before I need to prepare for them.

× I am learning different language and it requires a really good memorizing abilities especially when you have to learn some new vocabularies.

✓ I am learning different languages and it requires really good memorizing abilities especially when you have to learn some new vocabulary.

The word 'language' should be plural 'languages' because 'different' implies more than one. 'A really good memorizing abilities' is incorrect because 'abilities' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'vocabularies' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'vocabulary' is correct.

× I forgot that there was an exam on Saturday morning.

✓ I forgot that there was an exam on Saturday morning.

This sentence is correct in past tense and needs no correction.

× there are a lot of things that requires me to remember in my daily life.

✓ there are a lot of things that require me to remember in my daily life.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'require' not 'requires'.

× If I missed it, that will definitely damage my credit in this industry.

✓ If I miss it, that will definitely damage my credit in this industry.

The conditional sentence refers to a future possibility, so the correct form is 'If I miss it' (present tense) rather than 'If I missed it' (past tense).

× I make my list in the calendar on my phone which can help me to prevent forgetting some important things and also can ring me up 5 minutes in advance when I should be prepared for the things that I need to do next.

✓ I make my list on the calendar on my phone which can help me prevent forgetting some important things and also can remind me 5 minutes in advance when I should be prepared for the things that I need to do next.

The correct preposition is 'on the calendar' not 'in the calendar'. 'Help me to prevent' is better as 'help me prevent'. 'Ring me up' is incorrect here; 'remind me' is the appropriate phrase.