Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和口语填充词较多，建议减少"well"和"you know"等无意义词汇，使表达更简洁自然。同时，回答应更直接，避免冗长。

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget tasks, so I rely on my phone to remind me.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，如"she had waited me"应为"she waited for me"。建议使用连贯的句子，减少重复的口语词汇，增强表达的准确性和流畅性。

Exemplo: Yes, I forgot an important meeting with my academic advisor last weekend, where we were supposed to discuss my future plans. She waited for me for a long time.

Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法和表达错误，如"the Dylan's"不明确。建议明确列举需要记住的具体事项，避免模糊和错误表达。

Exemplo: I need to remember my family members' birthdays, important study deadlines, internship tasks, and program requirements.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如"I use my use my phone"。建议简洁表达，避免重复，使用连贯的句子说明如何利用手机和应用程序帮助记忆。

Exemplo: I usually create to-do lists on my phone and use reminder apps, which help me keep track of important tasks.

× Well, honestly, I wouldn't say that I'm good at memorizing things well, since you know, I usually forget most of the things I have to do and sometimes I need to use my phone to keep in mind.

✓ Well, honestly, I wouldn't say that I'm good at memorizing things, since you know, I usually forget most of the things I have to do and sometimes I need to use my phone to keep them in mind.

“keep in mind”后面需要有宾语，这里缺少宾语，应该补充“them”来指代前文提到的事情。

× Actually just last weekend. Well, you know, I forgot the meeting with my academic advisor while we plan to have a discussion about my future plan, but I just totally forgot it and well, she had waited me for a long time.

✓ Actually just last weekend. Well, you know, I forgot the meeting with my academic advisor while we were planning to have a discussion about my future plan, but I just totally forgot it and well, she had been waiting for me for a long time.

“plan”应使用过去进行时“were planning”表示当时正在计划；“had waited me”结构错误，正确用法是“had been waiting for me”，表示过去某段时间一直在等待。

× she had waited me for a long time.

✓ she had been waiting for me for a long time.

动词“wait”后面需要用介词“for”引出等待的对象，且过去完成进行时态更符合语境。

× Well, just like the Dylan's and requirements of my internship and my programs.

✓ Well, just like the deadlines and requirements of my internship and my programs.

“Dylan's”应为“deadlines”，且“deadlines”应为复数形式，表示多个截止日期。

× I will download it on my phone while you know it.

✓ I will download it to my phone, you know.

动词“download”后应接介词“to”表示下载到某处，不能用“on”。

× Well honestly I use my use my phone to create A to do list well and I also use some useful app.

✓ Well honestly, I use my phone to create a to-do list, and I also use some useful apps.

“well”位置不当，应去掉或放在句尾；“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”；“app”应为复数“apps”，表示多个应用程序。

× she had waited me for a long time.

✓ she had been waiting for me for a long time.

“wait”后面需要用介词“for”引出宾语，“waited me”结构错误。