Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, correct the grammar by saying "I am good at memorizing things" instead of "I am a good at memorizing things."

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For instance, I can easily remember the names of people I meet and events that happen around me.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Be specific and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, clarify the example with more details.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot the name of the street where my mother lives, so I couldn't find her house.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words. Also, avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, such as the names of the streets where I live and work, as well as the names of the people I meet and work with.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use consistent verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of information I need to remember. For example, I use formulas to memorize concepts in my studies, and for other important tasks, I rely on reminder apps on my phone.

× I am a good at memorizing things and I can memorize everything that happened around me and the name of people that I visited.

✓ I am good at memorizing things and I can memorize everything that happens around me and the names of people that I meet.

The phrase 'a good at' is incorrect; 'good at' does not require an article. 'Everything that happened' should be 'everything that happens' to match the present tense context. 'The name of people' should be pluralized to 'the names of people' to agree with the plural noun 'people'. Also, 'that I visited' is unclear; 'that I meet' fits better for people encountered regularly.

× Yes, of course I've forgotten some important memories about different things.

✓ Yes, of course I've forgotten some important things.

The phrase 'important memories about different things' is awkward and redundant. 'Memories' are not typically 'forgotten' in this context; it's clearer to say 'important things'. The present perfect tense 'I've forgotten' is correct here.

× For example, one time I forgot the name of the street my mother was and so I couldn't get.

✓ For example, one time I forgot the name of the street where my mother was, so I couldn't find it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'The street my mother was' lacks a preposition; 'where my mother was' is correct. 'I couldn't get' is incomplete; 'I couldn't find it' clarifies the meaning.

× There are many think that I I have to remember, for example, the name of the street I live and the name of the street at my workplace is and the name of people I meet every day and work with them and all some such information.

✓ There are many things that I have to remember, for example, the name of the street I live on, the name of the street where my workplace is, the names of people I meet every day and work with, and other such information.

'Many think' should be 'many things' to match the plural noun. 'The name of the street I live' needs the preposition 'on'. 'The name of the street at my workplace is' is incomplete; it should be 'the name of the street where my workplace is'. 'The name of people' should be pluralized to 'the names of people'. The phrase 'and all some such information' is awkward; 'and other such information' is clearer.

× For example, for some concepts in my studies I used some formula for remembering them and for other topics I use some reminder apps in my mobile phone to reminder me.

✓ For example, for some concepts in my studies, I use some formulas to remember them, and for other topics, I use reminder apps on my mobile phone to remind me.

'Used' should be 'use' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Some formula' should be plural 'some formulas' to match the plural 'concepts'. 'For remembering them' is better expressed as 'to remember them'. 'Reminder apps in my mobile phone' should be 'reminder apps on my mobile phone'. 'To reminder me' is incorrect; the verb form is 'to remind me'.