Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та не зовсім природна для носія мови. Спробуйте будувати речення більш чітко, використовуючи правильний порядок слів і уникаючи повторів. Також варто додати зв'язки між ідеями для кращої логіки.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone. Especially, I frequently lose my headphones because they are small and easy to misplace.

Sugestão: Ваша відповідь досить інформативна, але є граматичні помилки та не зовсім природний початок речення. Спробуйте починати з чіткої теми, а потім наводити приклади, використовуючи зв'язки для плавності.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot to book a taxi to the airport for my vacation. Consequently, on the day of my flight, all taxis were busy, and I was worried I might miss my flight.

Sugestão: Ваша відповідь містить корисну інформацію, але речення можна зробити більш природними і уникнути повторів. Використовуйте зв'язки для кращої структури та уникайте надмірного використання 'about'.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my university schedule, homework, and projects. Additionally, since I also work, I have to keep track of my work projects and my working hours.

Sugestão: Ваша відповідь коротка і містить граматичні помилки. Спробуйте розширити відповідь, пояснюючи, як саме ви використовуєте записи, і використовуйте правильні форми слів.

Exemplo: I usually write notes on my phone or in a notebook. This method helps me remember important tasks and information that I need to recall later.

× I'm ashamed to admit it but unfortunately I always forgot everything fine.

✓ I'm ashamed to admit it but unfortunately I always forget everything fine.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used.

× I never know where is my key, where is my phone, headphone especially I always lose my headphones because it's a small stuff so I never can find it.

✓ I never know where my key is, where my phone is, especially my headphones. I always lose my headphones because they are small items, so I can never find them.

The sentence has incorrect word order in indirect questions ('where is my key' should be 'where my key is'). Also, 'headphone' should be plural 'headphones' and 'stuff' is uncountable; 'items' is more appropriate. The sentence is long and run-on; splitting improves clarity.

× Because I'm quite often forgot about something important.

✓ Because I quite often forget about something important.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' is correct. Also, 'I'm' is incorrect here.

× I forgot to book a taxi to the airport.

✓ I forgot to book a taxi to the airport.

This sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a specific past event.

× I was really worried that I might miss my flight and ruin my vacation.

✓ I was really worried that I might miss my flight and ruin my vacation.

This sentence is correct in past tense and modal verb usage.

× I always need to remember my schedule at university, my homework and also about my project which I need to do in university.

✓ I always need to remember my schedule at university, my homework, and also my project which I need to do at university.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'remember'. Also, 'in university' is better as 'at university' when referring to attendance or location.

× I need to remember about my project at work and when I need to be at work.

✓ I need to remember my project at work and when I need to be at work.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect after 'remember'. It should be omitted.

× I try to do notice in the my phones or in the notebook.

✓ I try to make notes on my phone or in a notebook.

'Do notice' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make notes'. Also, 'the my phones' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone'. 'In the notebook' is better as 'in a notebook' unless a specific notebook is known.

× I think it's help me to remember old stuff which I need.

✓ I think it helps me to remember old stuff that I need.

'It's help me' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'helps'. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses.