Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
To be honest, I am not good at memorizing things because I tend to forget. My my mom tells me to buy some. If I don't have a list I will forget. I felt that it's a very big problem not remember.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
I actually indeed did forget. A big important thing is my art project to turn in. The teacher told us we can make some changes. But then I took it home and I forgot it bring it back to school because I was feeling sick, disappointed.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
In my daily life, I need to remember these like basic things to do like washing dishes and brushing my teeth, putting on clothes and umm, throwing trash in the trash can and cleaning up my cat's litter box like that.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I remember important things is probably by doing A to do list of important things I need to do like assignments. Before informative we use summative and formative tests. I always note it down.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且有重复词汇。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用连贯的句子结构。
Exemplo: To be honest, I am not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget easily. For example, my mom often asks me to buy groceries, but if I don't have a list, I usually forget some items.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更流畅和清晰。
Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot to bring my art project to school. Although the teacher allowed us to make changes, I took it home but forgot to bring it back because I was feeling sick.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答内容较为简单且有口语填充词。建议去除多余词汇，使用更丰富的词汇描述日常任务，使表达更自然。
Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember basic tasks such as washing dishes, brushing my teeth, getting dressed, taking out the trash, and cleaning my cat's litter box.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和不相关内容，表达不清晰。建议专注于回答问题，使用正确的语法，并避免无关信息。
Exemplo: I usually remember important things by making a to-do list, especially for assignments. Writing them down helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.
Gramática
× My my mom tells me to buy some.
✓ My mom tells me to buy some.
句子中重复使用了“my”，属于多余的词语，应删除一个以符合语法规范。
× I felt that it's a very big problem not remember.
✓ I feel that it's a very big problem not to remember.
原句中“not remember”缺少不定式“to”，导致句子结构不完整，应改为“not to remember”。
× I actually indeed did forget.
✓ I actually did forget.
“actually”与“indeed”意义重复，且“indeed”位置不当，去掉“indeed”使句子更自然。
× A big important thing is my art project to turn in.
✓ A very important thing is my art project to turn in.
“big important”搭配不自然，应使用“very important”来修饰名词。
× I forgot it bring it back to school because I was feeling sick, disappointed.
✓ I forgot to bring it back to school because I was feeling sick and disappointed.
“forgot”后应接不定式“to bring”，而非动词原形；另外，形容词“disappointed”前应加连词“and”。
× I was feeling sick, disappointed.
✓ I was feeling sick and disappointed.
两个形容词之间应使用连词“and”连接，而非逗号。
× Before informative we use summative and formative tests.
✓ Before the informative test, we use summative and formative tests.
“Before informative”缺少冠词和名词，应补充完整为“Before the informative test”。
× I remember important things is probably by doing A to do list of important things I need to do like assignments.
✓ I remember important things probably by making a to-do list of important things I need to do, like assignments.
原句结构混乱，需调整为“by making a to-do list”且“to do list”应连写为“to-do list”。
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