Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve ifadelerin daha akıcı olması gerekiyor. "I give it them a value" ifadesi yanlış kullanılmış, "I give them value" veya "I value them" daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha etkili yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing special moments or important days because I value them highly, which makes me feel happy and alive.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "haven't forgetting" yanlış, "haven't forgotten" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz biraz uzun ve karmaşık, daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanmalısınız. Bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Exemplo: To be honest, I haven't forgotten any important dates or memorable events before. However, when I have many tasks, especially related to school, I sometimes forget special dates. If I realize this, I always apologize to the people involved.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda çok fazla "umm" kullanımı var, bu da akıcılığı azaltıyor. Ayrıca, cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha net ve tamamlanmış cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I usually prefer using a notebook application on my iPhone because I'm not good at writing by hand. For example, when I need to remember deadlines for my assignments or projects, I definitely use my phone. This method helps me feel more relaxed and organized.

Sugestão: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları var, örneğin "a application" yerine "an application" olmalı. Ayrıca, "writing down by my hand" ifadesi yerine "writing by hand" daha doğru olur. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I usually prefer using a notebook application on my iPhone because I'm not very good at writing by hand. For example, when I need to remember deadlines for my assignments or projects, I use this app. In my opinion, using a notebook application is easier than writing in a physical notebook. This method helps me stay organized and feel more relaxed throughout the day.

× Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing moments or any special day because I give it them a value so it makes me feel happy and alive.

✓ Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing moments or any special day because I give them value so it makes me feel happy and alive.

The phrase 'give it them a value' incorrectly uses pronouns. 'Them' is the correct object pronoun referring to 'moments or any special day', and 'value' does not need an article here. The correct phrase is 'give them value'.

× To be honest, I haven't forgetting any important dates or memorable events before, but if I had to do a lot of things, especially about school, I sometimes would forget the special dates.

✓ To be honest, I haven't forgotten any important dates or memorable events before, but if I have to do a lot of things, especially about school, I sometimes forget the special dates.

The phrase 'haven't forgetting' is incorrect; the present perfect requires the past participle 'forgotten'. Also, 'if I had to do' should be present tense 'if I have to do' to match the habitual action, and 'sometimes would forget' should be 'sometimes forget' for correct tense and modality.

× But after that, if I realized that situation, I would apologize to the persons.

✓ But after that, if I realize that situation, I would apologize to the people.

'If I realized' should be present tense 'if I realize' to express a conditional situation. Also, 'the persons' is unnatural; 'the people' is the correct plural noun here.

× I usually prefer using a notebook application on my iPhone.

✓ I usually prefer using the notebook application on my iPhone.

When referring to a specific application on the iPhone, the definite article 'the' is appropriate instead of the indefinite 'a'.

× I'm not a writing person, that is not my thing.

✓ I'm not a writing person; that is not my thing.

This sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved by replacing the comma with a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses.

× So if I needed to remember umm, deadline for my assignments or the project or any special dates, I would definitely umm, use my phone.

✓ So if I need to remember a deadline for my assignments or the project or any special dates, I would definitely use my phone.

'Needed' should be present tense 'need' to match the conditional. Also, 'deadline' requires an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun.

× Umm. I think it's makes me feel umm, more relaxed and.

✓ Umm. I think it makes me feel more relaxed.

'It's makes' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which should be removed for completeness.

× I usually prefer using a application notebook on my iPhone.

✓ I usually prefer using an application notebook on my iPhone.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound as in 'application'.

× I'm not really good at writing down by my hand.

✓ I'm not really good at writing by hand.

The phrase 'writing down by my hand' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'writing by hand' without 'down' or 'my'.

× For example, when I need to deadlines for my assignments or the project, I use my notebook application.

✓ For example, when I need to meet deadlines for my assignments or the project, I use my notebook application.

'Need to deadlines' is incorrect; 'deadlines' is plural and needs a verb like 'meet' to be correct.

× In my opinion, using notebook application is easier than the writing down on the notebook.

✓ In my opinion, using the notebook application is easier than writing down on a notebook.

'Using notebook application' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the writing down on the notebook' is awkward; 'writing down on a notebook' is better.

× This method helps me stay organized and feel more relaxed throughout the date.

✓ This method helps me stay organized and feel more relaxed throughout the day.

'Throughout the date' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'throughout the day' to indicate the time period.