Memory— Part 1 Relatório
Conversa
Part 1
Examinador
Are you good at memorising things?
Candidato
No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. In fact, my wife often reminds me about this because I tend to forget important details about what we did or what happened in the past. I think it's because I have a poor memory, so she usually helps me by keeping track of those things.
Examinador
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Candidato
I have sometimes forgotten people's names, even those of close friends. Although I recognize them, I just can't seem to come up with their names, which can be quite embarrassing. This CJ happens when I'm tired or distracted.
Examinador
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Candidato
I need to remember what to buy when I go to supermarket grocery stores. I usually realize what I wanted by when I got home, so it's important to take a memo before going there.
Examinador
How do you remember important things?
Candidato
I usually take a memo on my phone or paper. Umm or I reminder. I set a reminder on my phone and uh yeah, I just like trying. Wow.
Avaliação
Total
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: Answerは自然ですが、少し長すぎて冗長に感じられます。5文以内にまとめ、より直接的に質問に答えることを意識しましょう。また、"In fact"の使い方は良いですが、もう少し具体的な例を加えると良いです。
Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget appointments or important dates. Because of this, my wife usually reminds me about them to help me stay organized.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: "This CJ"は意味が不明で、発音や言葉の選択に注意が必要です。回答は具体的で良いですが、より自然な表現と明確な理由付けを加えると良いでしょう。
Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, especially when I'm tired or distracted. For instance, I might meet a close friend but struggle to remember their name, which makes me feel embarrassed.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 文法ミス（"by when I got home"）があり、意味が少し分かりにくいです。より簡潔で正確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いです。
Exemplo: I need to remember the items I want to buy at the supermarket. Sometimes, I only realize what I forgot after I get home, so I always make a shopping list before I go.
How do you remember important things?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答が不自然で、言葉に詰まっている部分が多いです。簡潔で明確な文を作り、不要な言葉を避けましょう。また、具体的な方法を説明すると良いです。
Exemplo: I usually write notes on my phone or on paper. Also, I set reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget important things.
Gramática
× This CJ happens when I'm tired or distracted.
✓ This just happens when I'm tired or distracted.
The pronoun 'CJ' is incorrect and unclear in this context. It seems to be a typo or mishearing. Replacing it with 'just' makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.
× I need to remember what to buy when I go to supermarket grocery stores.
✓ I need to remember what to buy when I go to the supermarket or grocery stores.
The phrase 'go to supermarket grocery stores' lacks the definite article 'the' before 'supermarket' and is awkwardly phrased. Adding 'the' and separating 'supermarket' and 'grocery stores' with 'or' improves clarity and correctness.
× I usually realize what I wanted by when I got home, so it's important to take a memo before going there.
✓ I usually realize what I wanted when I get home, so it's important to take a memo before going there.
The sentence mixes past tense 'wanted' and 'got' with 'usually' which indicates habitual action. Changing 'got' to 'get' aligns the tense with habitual present, and 'wanted' is acceptable as it refers to past desire, but 'realize' should be present tense to match habitual action.
× Umm or I reminder.
✓ Umm, or I set a reminder.
The phrase 'I reminder' is incorrect because 'reminder' is a noun and cannot be used as a verb here. Adding 'set' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
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