Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit redundant and contains minor grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct phrases like 'for tend to forget' to 'tend to forget'. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because my memory tends to be weak. For example, I often forget details within a week, so I consider myself a poor memoriser.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'like' and improve sentence clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important tasks at work. For instance, my department chief assigned me a task on Friday, but I forgot about it by Monday, which negatively affected my professional reputation.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and filler words. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific. Also, avoid informal fillers such as 'uh' and 'like'.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks, so I make a checklist every day based on my boss's assignments. Besides work, I also need to remember personal errands, such as buying groceries and taking care of my family.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating ideas and filler words. Use linking words to connect sentences and improve fluency.

Exemplo: Since I'm not good at remembering things, I usually write notes in my diary. This helps me keep track of the tasks I need to complete.

× I usually for tend to forget things in a week or so.

✓ I usually tend to forget things in a week or so.

The phrase 'for tend to' is incorrect because 'for' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'tend to' which means 'usually do'. Removing 'for' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Many times some task which I had to do at work, I forgot that like at Fridays my DC has given me a task and when I was back at work on Monday I forgot that thing and it really like harmed me professionally.

✓ Many times, some tasks which I had to do at work, I forgot. For example, on Fridays my DC gave me a task and when I was back at work on Monday, I forgot it and it really harmed me professionally.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition use such as 'at Fridays' which should be 'on Fridays'. Also, the sentence is run-on and unclear. Breaking it into clearer sentences and correcting prepositions improves clarity and grammar.

× my DC has given me a task

✓ my DC gave me a task

The use of present perfect 'has given' is incorrect here because the time is specified ('on Fridays'), so simple past 'gave' is appropriate.

× I forgot that thing

✓ I forgot it

Using 'that thing' is wordy and less natural. The pronoun 'it' is more appropriate to refer to the previously mentioned task.

× Like I make a checklist every day of assigned tasks by my boss.

✓ I make a checklist every day of the tasks assigned by my boss.

The phrase 'assigned tasks by my boss' is awkward. Using 'the tasks assigned by my boss' is a better prepositional phrase and more natural.

× what other things I have to do like, other than work, like getting groceries or doing something, uh, for my family and all.

✓ what other things I have to do, like getting groceries or doing something for my family and so on, other than work.

The original sentence has awkward pronoun and phrase placement. Rearranging for clarity and natural flow improves the sentence.

× I'm not good at remembering thing.

✓ I'm not good at remembering things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items to remember. This is a quantifier issue.

× Therefore I use usually make a note on my diary.

✓ Therefore, I usually make a note in my diary.

The adverb 'usually' should come before the verb 'make'. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'in my diary' is correct.