Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は自然ですが、最後の文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。文を完結させ、具体的な効果や理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things. For example, I can remember people's faces even if I have never met them before. This ability helps me build better relationships quickly.

Sugestão: 文法ミスと不自然な表現があります。過去の経験を述べた後、改善策を明確に説明し、文を正しく構成しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. After that experience, I started making lists to help me remember important tasks.

Sugestão: 回答は簡潔ですが、内容がやや曖昧です。具体的な仕事内容やタスクの例を加えると、より説得力が増します。

Exemplo: I need to remember many tasks in my daily life at my store, such as managing inventory, assisting customers, and handling cash transactions.

Sugestão: 最後の文が不完全で、効果が伝わりにくいです。リスト作成の利点を具体的に説明し、文を完結させましょう。

Exemplo: I usually make lists to remember important tasks at my store. By doing so, I stay organized and ensure that nothing is forgotten.

× I'm able to remember people's faces even if I have never been met before.

✓ I'm able to remember people's faces even if I have never met them before.

The phrase 'have never been met before' incorrectly uses the passive past participle form. The correct form is 'have never met them before' because 'meet' is an active verb here and requires an object pronoun 'them'.

× This ability leads to good.

✓ This ability is beneficial.

The sentence 'This ability leads to good' is incomplete and unclear. 'Leads to good' is not a proper phrase. It should be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly, such as 'This ability is beneficial.'

× Yes, I have such experience that I forgot something important.

✓ Yes, I have had such an experience where I forgot something important.

The original sentence mixes present perfect 'have' with past tense 'forgot' incorrectly. The phrase 'have such experience' should be 'have had such an experience' to indicate a past event experienced. Also, 'that' should be 'where' to connect the clauses properly.

× After that I I'm used to make a list to improve this.

✓ After that, I got used to making a list to improve this.

The phrase 'I I'm used to make' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I got used to making' because 'used to' followed by a verb requires the '-ing' form. Also, 'After that' should be followed by a comma for clarity.

× I need to remember a wide range of works in my daily life at my store, a lot of tasks every day.

✓ I need to remember a wide range of work in my daily life at my store, a lot of tasks every day.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job in general. Therefore, 'a wide range of work' is correct.