Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid redundancy by choosing precise vocabulary and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: I'm not very good at remembering small details like street names or my study schedule. However, I always make an effort to remember important things such as my ID card and phone number because they are essential for daily life.

Sugestão: Focus on grammatical accuracy and coherence. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately. Provide specific details clearly and avoid repetition. Keep sentences concise and correct verb tenses.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot my study schedule, which caused a big problem. My lesson started at 7:00 AM, but I woke up late and rushed to school. Unfortunately, the gate was already closed, so I missed the class.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about what you remember and how you organize your tasks. Avoid repetition and clarify your points.

Exemplo: I often use my mobile phone to make plans, which helps me stay organized and focus on my studies and work. Honestly, I enjoy the feeling of crossing tasks off my list when I complete them.

Sugestão: Work on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. Specify your methods clearly and avoid vague phrases. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I use several methods to remember important things. For instance, I often write notes on paper and rely on digital devices like my phone to remind me of important tasks at designated times.

× Actually I'm not good at remember small thing around me such as street name or even my study schedule but I always do make an effort to remember to memorable things such important things such as ID card or my phone number because it's essential for my daily life.

✓ Actually I'm not good at remembering small things around me such as street names or even my study schedule but I always make an effort to remember memorable things such as important things like my ID card or my phone number because they're essential for my daily life.

The phrase 'good at' should be followed by a verb in the -ing form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'. Also, 'small thing' should be plural 'small things' to match the context, and 'street name' should be plural 'street names'. 'Do make' is unnecessary here; 'make' suffices. 'To memorable things' is incorrect; it should be 'memorable things'. 'Such important things such as' is redundant; 'such as important things like' is clearer. 'ID card or my phone number' should be 'my ID card or my phone number' for consistency. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural subject 'ID card and phone number'.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my study schedule which was big problem because my lesson started at 7:00 AM, but I wake up a late and run to school, but unfortunately the guest would already close so I misses the class.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my study schedule which was a big problem because my lesson started at 7:00 AM, but I woke up late and ran to school, but unfortunately the gate was already closed so I missed the class.

The sentence contains several past tense errors. 'Wake up a late' should be 'woke up late' to match past tense. 'Run to school' should be 'ran to school' for past tense. 'The guest would already close' is incorrect; it should be 'the gate was already closed'. 'I misses the class' should be 'I missed the class' to agree with past tense.

× I often make plans by mobile phone I thinks is also help me to become organize and focus my study on my work and honestly I enjoy the feeling when I cross thing thing when I'm done.

✓ I often make plans using my mobile phone. I think it also helps me to become organized and focus on my study and work, and honestly I enjoy the feeling when I cross things off when I'm done.

'I thinks' should be 'I think' because 'think' is first person singular present tense. 'Is also help' should be 'also helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Become organize' should be 'become organized' (adjective form). 'Focus my study on my work' is awkward; 'focus on my study and work' is clearer. 'Cross thing thing' is incorrect; it should be 'cross things off' to express completing tasks.

× I use several approaches to remember important things such as I often write down on the paper and I rely on digital device like my phone to reminder important things for me but it's designated area.

✓ I use several approaches to remember important things such as often writing them down on paper and relying on digital devices like my phone to remind me of important things, but they have designated areas.

'Write down on the paper' should be 'writing them down on paper' because 'write down' already implies 'on paper'. 'I rely on digital device' should be 'relying on digital devices' for plural and gerund form. 'To reminder important things for me' is incorrect; it should be 'to remind me of important things'. 'It's designated area' is unclear; 'they have designated areas' is more appropriate referring to devices or apps.