Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repeated words. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I create a daily schedule every morning. This helps me remember what tasks I need to complete throughout the day, making it easier to stay organized.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'something new' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the situation to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I have forgotten important tasks before. For instance, once my supervisor asked me to insulate pipes, which was a new task for me. However, I was busy with other activities and forgot to do it.

Sugestão: Your answer covers relevant points but could be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and vague phrases like 'or something.' Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember to call my relatives to check on their well-being. Additionally, I keep track of my work tasks and locations each day. Furthermore, I make sure to remember any plans I have made with friends.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding repetition. Instead of saying 'I memorize,' explain your methods more specifically. Also, clarify unclear terms like 'margin varsity.'

Exemplo: I usually mark important dates, such as birthdays or special events, on my calendar. This helps me remember upcoming occasions. Additionally, I try to memorize key tasks by repeating them to myself throughout the day.

× I got a, a schedule for myself a day in the very mornings, the things I have to do throughout the day.

✓ I have a schedule for myself every morning, listing the things I have to do throughout the day.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'a' before 'day' and 'very mornings'. The phrase should be 'every morning' to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'I got' is informal and better replaced with 'I have' for clarity and correctness.

× I was doing other activities so I just forget that thing.

✓ I was doing other activities so I just forgot that thing.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past context indicated by 'was doing'. This is a past tense issue.

× I have to remember if I have promised someone for going out or something.

✓ I have to remember if I have promised someone to go out or something.

The phrase 'promised someone for going out' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'promised someone to go out'. The preposition 'for' is not used after 'promise' in this context.

× For important things I usually mark them on calendar.

✓ For important things, I usually mark them on the calendar.

The phrase 'on calendar' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'on the calendar' because it refers to a specific calendar.