Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много слов-паразитов и повторений, что снижает естественность речи. Следует избегать слов типа "uh", "umm" и излишних повторов, а также строить более чёткие и лаконичные предложения.

Exemplo: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I can easily remember important dates and the names of people I meet. This strong memory skill is something I really value about myself.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много слов-паразитов и нечеткие формулировки, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и ясные предложения, избегать повторов и уточнять мысли.

Exemplo: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always write down important information in my diary or phone so I can remember it easily.

Sugestão: Ответ достаточно информативен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и немного запутанную структуру. Следует улучшить согласование времен и построение предложений для большей ясности.

Exemplo: As a mother of two children under three, I need to remember if I have changed my child's diaper and also keep track of the day to know whether I have to go to university or not.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много слов-паразитов и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется использовать более связные предложения и избегать повторов, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и понятной.

Exemplo: I usually write important things in my diary or use reminder apps on my phone, like the To-Do List or calendar. This helps me stay organized and remember everything easily.

× No, I don't remember that. Uh, I've forgotten something very important in my life because all the necessary things are put down, uh, right, it wrote. Written down in my copy book, in my diary or, uh, technical on the on the phone so that I can keep them every time with me.

✓ No, I don't remember that. Uh, I've forgotten something very important in my life because all the necessary things are put down, uh, right, written down in my copy book, in my diary or, uh, technically on the phone so that I can keep them with me all the time.

The phrase 'it wrote. Written down' is incorrect. 'Written' is the past participle and should be used without 'it wrote'. Also, 'technical' should be 'technically' as an adverb modifying the phrase 'on the phone'. The correct form is 'written down' and 'technically on the phone'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No, I don't remember that. Uh, I've forgotten something very important in my life because all the necessary things are put down, uh, right, it wrote. Written down in my copy book, in my diary or, uh, technical on the on the phone so that I can keep them every time with me.

✓ No, I don't remember that. Uh, I've forgotten something very important in my life because all the necessary things are put down, uh, right, written down in my copy book, in my diary or, uh, technically on the phone so that I can keep them with me all the time.

The phrase 'keep them every time with me' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'keep them with me all the time'. 'With me' indicates possession or proximity, and 'all the time' indicates frequency. This correction improves naturalness and grammatical accuracy.

× As I'm a mom of two kids under three, the first things that I should remember is whether my child changed his diaper or not, and secondly, I think that what day is it today is in order to go or not to go to the university.

✓ As I'm a mom of two kids under three, the first thing that I should remember is whether my child changed his diaper or not, and secondly, I think that what day it is today is important in order to decide whether to go to the university or not.

The phrase 'the first things that I should remember is' mixes plural 'things' with singular verb 'is'. It should be 'the first thing that I should remember is' to maintain subject-verb agreement. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× As I'm a mom of two kids under three, the first things that I should remember is whether my child changed his diaper or not, and secondly, I think that what day is it today is in order to go or not to go to the university.

✓ As I'm a mom of two kids under three, the first thing that I should remember is whether my child changed his diaper or not, and secondly, I think that knowing what day it is today helps me decide whether to go to the university or not.

The original sentence has awkward structure and unclear meaning. Reordering and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness, making the sentence easier to understand.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I write it down on my diary, uh, or just, umm, very easily can attach in my phone in my reminder app.

✓ As I have mentioned earlier, I write it down in my diary, uh, or just, umm, very easily attach it to my phone in my reminder app.

The correct preposition with 'diary' is 'in' not 'on'. Also, 'attach in my phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'attach it to my phone'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× As I have mentioned earlier, I write it down on my diary, uh, or just, umm, very easily can attach in my phone in my reminder app.

✓ As I have mentioned earlier, I write it down in my diary, uh, or just, umm, I can very easily attach it to my phone in my reminder app.

The original sentence has incorrect word order 'very easily can attach'. The correct order is 'can very easily attach'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is needed to clarify what is being attached. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× So in To Do List, uh, for instance, or in calendar, uh, kind of stuff, Umm, and it's very convenient way to keep all everything organized and remember.

✓ So in the To-Do List, uh, for instance, or in the calendar, uh, kind of stuff, umm, and it's a very convenient way to keep everything organized and remember.

The phrases 'in To Do List' and 'in calendar' require definite articles 'the'. Also, 'all everything' is redundant; 'everything' alone suffices. Adding 'a' before 'very convenient way' is necessary for grammatical correctness.