Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and use correct tense and grammar. Also, provide specific examples with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, during high school, I excelled in memorising history and English test materials, which helped me achieve the highest scores. However, sometimes I do forget things despite my confidence in my memory.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition and unclear phrasing. Use linking words to structure your answer logically and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify the sequence of events to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot about my high school graduation ceremony. Fortunately, I was able to join the ceremony even though I arrived late.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks because they are very important. Therefore, I always write them down in my diary to make sure I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating words. Also, clarify your habits with specific examples and correct sentence structure.

Exemplo: I remember important things by writing them down in my notebook or diary. For instance, when I hear about a friend's or family member's birthday, I make a habit of noting it down immediately to avoid forgetting it.

× I'm gonna memorize things because I I wasn't a high school student.

✓ I'm going to memorize things because I am a high school student.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes present intention with past tense 'wasn't'. Since the speaker is talking about current intention, the correct tense is present 'am'. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is clearer.

× I was good at memorizing tests like history tests or English tests, which is quite difficult for everyone, but I got highest score at a time.

✓ I was good at memorizing tests like history tests or English tests, which are quite difficult for everyone, but I got the highest score at one time.

The phrase 'which is' should be 'which are' because it refers to plural 'tests'. Also, 'highest score' needs the definite article 'the'. 'At a time' is unclear; 'at one time' or 'once' is better.

× I thought I have a confidence about that memory, but sometimes I forgot anything.

✓ I thought I had confidence in that memory, but sometimes I forget things.

The sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. 'Thought' is past, so 'have' should be 'had'. 'Confidence about' should be 'confidence in'. 'Forgot anything' is incorrect; 'forget things' is appropriate.

× Yes, I have I forgotten about the graduation ceremony in high school.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten about the graduation ceremony in high school.

The phrase 'I have I forgotten' is incorrect; it should be 'I have forgotten' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× I forgot to go to the the graduation ceremony at the time and I delayed but unfortunately, unfortunately I managed to uh join the ceremony during the ongoing so.

✓ I forgot to go to the graduation ceremony at the time and I was late, but unfortunately, I managed to join the ceremony while it was ongoing.

'Delayed' is incorrect here; 'was late' is appropriate. 'During the ongoing so' is unclear; 'while it was ongoing' is correct.

× Uh, I need to remember the task of work because it provides us lots of as important things.

✓ Uh, I need to remember the tasks at work because they involve many important things.

'Task of work' should be 'tasks at work'. 'Lots of as important things' is incorrect; 'many important things' is correct.

× So I need to, I shouldn't forget everything that I need to do.

✓ So I need to remember; I shouldn't forget anything that I need to do.

The sentence is contradictory and unclear. 'I shouldn't forget everything' implies forgetting all, which is incorrect. It should be 'I shouldn't forget anything'.

× So I, uh, to, not to remember that I know, take, I take note downs on my diary.

✓ So, to remember that, I take notes in my diary.

'Take note downs' is incorrect; 'take notes' is correct. 'On my diary' should be 'in my diary'. The original sentence is fragmented and unclear.

× I write down a notebook or diary to remember the important thing, especially especially like birthday of friends, friend's birthday or family's birthday.

✓ I write in a notebook or diary to remember important things, especially birthdays of friends or family members.

'Write down a notebook' is incorrect; it should be 'write in a notebook'. 'The important thing' should be plural 'important things'. 'Birthday of friends' should be 'birthdays of friends'.

× Uh, when I hard hear hard or listen to their birthday birthday, I uh, make habits of writing down umm of their first day on my diary.

✓ When I hear or listen to their birthdays, I make a habit of writing them down in my diary.

'Hard hear hard' is incorrect; it should be 'hear'. 'Make habits' should be 'make a habit'. 'Writing down of their first day' is unclear; it should be 'writing them down'. 'On my diary' should be 'in my diary'.