MemoryPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Are you good at memorising things?

Candidato

It depends on the situation. Something that I am not interested in will for will be forgotten easily, while some. What are some?

Examinador

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Candidato

Yes, I have. Once I need to participate in an important examination, but I forget to bring my ID card so I can't get in the room finally.

Examinador

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Candidato

Yeah, I am a student studying Shenzhen University. I need to remember the knowledge and skills I have learned in the daily life.

Examinador

How do you remember important things?

Candidato

Uh, good method for remembering important things is that I can write down A to do list on paper or on my forms. It can be set up a remember reminder and alarm when it's time to do.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 回答含混且语法错误较多,句子不连贯,未直接给出明确主题句并且超出或偏离话题。建议用一至两句直接回应(肯定或否定),然后用一至两句具体说明原因或举例,注意语法与句子连贯性,使用连接词如 'because', 'however'。多练习将口语组织成最多五句的简洁回答。

Exemplo: I’m fairly good at memorising things, but it depends on the topic. For example, I easily remember facts related to my studies because I review them frequently, however I often forget details about topics I’m not interested in.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答基本能传达意思,但语法时态与词序有错误,细节描述可以更具体且更自然地连接事件顺序。建议用过去时描述事件,说明发生的后果并加一两句反思或结果,使用连接词如 'so' 或 'As a result'。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Once I was going to take an important exam, but I forgot my ID card at home, so I couldn’t enter the exam room and missed that test. After that I always check my bag the night before.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答较为直接但有冗余(如自我介绍不必要),缺少具体示例或说明怎样记住这些内容。建议先直接回答问题,然后给出具体类型(课程、作业、时间安排)并举一两个具体例子,使用连接词如 'for example'。

Exemplo: As a university student, I need to remember course content, deadlines and practical skills. For example, I memorise formulas for physics and keep a schedule for assignment due dates so I don’t miss anything.

How do you remember important things?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答内容清晰且实用,但语法和措辞需更自然,句子可更简洁连贯。建议使用一到两句主题句说明主要方法,然后用连词和具体细节说明步骤或工具,例如 'I write to-do lists and set phone alarms',并举短例说明效果。

Exemplo: I usually write a to-do list and set reminders on my phone. For instance, I put exam dates on my calendar and set an alarm the day before so I have time to prepare.

Gramática

Sentence structure errors

× Something that I am not interested in will for will be forgotten easily, while some. What are some?

Something that I am not interested in will be forgotten easily, while things I am interested in are not.

句子结构混乱,存在多余词语和不完整从句。“will for will be” 是冗余且错误的表达;“while some. What are some?” 是不完整断句。建议将句子整理为完整对比结构:主句 + while + 对比从句,保持主语明确(things/ those)并去掉多余的助动词。

Past tense issue

× Once I need to participate in an important examination, but I forget to bring my ID card so I can't get in the room finally.

Once I had to take an important examination, but I forgot to bring my ID card so I couldn't get into the exam room.

时态不一致:描述过去事件应使用过去时,而句中使用了现在时(need, forget, can't)。此外,'get in the room' 用法不自然,应为 'get into the exam room' 或 'enter the exam room'。建议统一使用过去时态并使用更自然的搭配。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember the knowledge and skills I have learned in the daily life.

I need to remember the knowledge and skills I have learned in daily life.

介词搭配错误,英语中通常说 'in daily life' 或 'in my daily life',不需要加定冠词 'the'。建议去掉 'the' 或改为 'in my daily life'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, good method for remembering important things is that I can write down A to do list on paper or on my forms.

A good method for remembering important things is that I can write a to-do list on paper or on my phone.

代词/词序和名词使用不当:应使用不定冠词 'A good method','write down A to do list' 的大小写和顺序错误,'forms' 不是合适的设备名词,推测想表达 'phone' 或 'form(s)' 不合逻辑。建议改为 'write a to-do list on paper or on my phone'。

Modal verb usage

× It can be set up a remember reminder and alarm when it's time to do.

I can set up a reminder and an alarm for when it's time to do something.

情态/语态使用不当,'It can be set up a remember reminder' 被动句和名词重复(remember reminder)不自然。更自然的表达是主动式 'I can set up a reminder and an alarm' 并用 'for when' 或 'to remind me when' 引导时间。

Vocabulário

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
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