Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ расплывчатый, с ошибками грамматики и лексики. Нужна более структурированная тема-предложение и конкретные детали; избегайте тавтологии и исправьте времена (корректно говорить о прошлом). Также сократите до 2–3 предложений и используйте связку для логики.

Exemplo: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things. For example, I keep my children’s toys and many childhood keepsakes because they help me remember important moments from the past.

Sugestão: Ответ неясный, много грамматических ошибок и плохая связность. Нужно начать с прямого ответа, затем привести конкретный пример и объяснить причину или результат. Используйте связочные слова (for example, once, because).

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, once I went into the kitchen to get a spoon but forgot why I was there. This often happens when I’m distracted by other tasks.

Sugestão: Ответ слишком короткий и не отвечает на вопрос конкретно. Нужно назвать конкретные вещи, которые вы должны запоминать, и объяснить почему, используя 1–2 поддерживающих предложения и связующие слова.

Exemplo: In my daily life I need to remember appointments, my children’s schedules and shopping lists. For instance, I write down school pick-up times so I don’t miss them.

Sugestão: Ответ понятен, но неестественен и есть ошибки. Начните с чёткого утверждения о методе, затем добавьте детали о том, как вы используете метод и почему он эффективен. Уберите лишние фразы («It's very great question for me»).

Exemplo: I usually write important tasks in a daily notebook and review it every morning. This helps me prioritise my day and ensures I don’t forget deadlines.

× Yes, I am good at memorizing things. Absolutely. I have a very a lot of things for memories and I kept my children's toys when I was children and it's good.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorizing things. Absolutely. I have a lot of memories, and I kept my children's toys when I was a child; it's nice.

The student used incorrect adjective/adverb combinations and incorrect noun forms. 'a very a lot of things for memories' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot of memories'. 'when I was children' mixes singular/plural; 'a child' is correct. 'it's good' is vague; 'it's nice' is more natural. Suggestion: simplify phrases, use 'a lot of' + plural noun, match singular/plural subjects and use clear adjectives.

× Absolutely yes. And at this times I forgot anything and when I come to the kitchen for the spoon and I forget it is it's very last thing.

✓ Yes, absolutely. At that time I forgot something: when I came to the kitchen for a spoon I forgot it; it was the last thing on my mind.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect time expressions. Use simple past for a past event: 'at that time' not 'at this times'; 'forgot something' instead of 'forgot anything' here. Use past tense 'came' and 'forgot'. 'it's very last thing' should be 'it was the last thing on my mind'. Suggestion: choose past tense consistently for past events, use correct time words ('that time'), and use natural idiomatic expressions.

× In my opinion, I need remember in my daily life, Yeah, absolutely.

✓ In my opinion, I need to remember things in my daily life, yes, absolutely.

The verb 'need' requires the infinitive 'to remember' after it. Also 'in my daily life' needs an object such as 'things'. Suggestion: use 'need to' + base verb and include an object when appropriate.

× It's very great question for me and I remember important things I do writing this in my daily notebook.

✓ That's a great question for me. To remember important things, I write them in my daily notebook.

The original wrongly uses 'do writing' which is ungrammatical; after 'do' you would use the base verb, but here the structure should be an infinitive or simple present: 'To remember... I write' or 'I remember important things by writing them...'. Also 'It's very great question' should be 'That's a great question'. Suggestion: use 'To + verb' or 'I + verb(s)' correctly and use 'by + -ing' for describing a method (e.g., 'by writing them').