Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid filler words and repetition, and give one concise reason with a brief example. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, so) to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Not really. I tend to forget unimportant details because I focus my attention on more important tasks. For example, I often forget small errands like buying milk, because I prioritise work deadlines instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a brief specific example. Avoid asking rhetorical questions that distract from the response. Use linking words like because or so to explain how you prevent forgetting important things.

Exemplo: Occasionally I have forgotten important things, but not often, because I use a note-taking app to record deadlines and appointments. For instance, once I almost missed a meeting, but the app reminded me so I was on time.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement about what you need to remember, then give one or two specific examples. Reduce hesitations and finish the sentence. Use linking words such as for example or such as to introduce examples.

Exemplo: I need to remember my daily tasks and appointments. For example, I keep a to-do list to remind me of work tasks and meetings so I don't miss important responsibilities.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the method you use, then briefly explain how it helps with a specific example. Pronounce or spell app names clearly and use linking words like for example or so that to show result.

Exemplo: I use a reminder app on my phone to remember important things. For example, the app notifies me of meetings and deadlines, so I check my calendar and never miss appointments.

× Help not uh, in fact I often forgive many thing, uh, for example, uh, easy, easy for me to forget uh, a thing which is not important because I have to notice some important.

✓ No, not really. In fact, I often forget many things. For example, it is easy for me to forget things that are not important because I have to pay attention to more important things.

Sentence has multiple issues: incorrect word choice 'Help not' should be 'No, not really' to answer the question; 'forgive' is wrong verb, should be 'forget' (verb choice); 'many thing' is singular/plural error (use 'many things'); awkward clause 'easy, easy for me to forget' should be 'it is easy for me to forget' (sentence structure and use of dummy it); 'a thing which is not important' should be plural 'things that are not important' (plural and relative clause); 'I have to notice some important' is ungrammatical—use 'pay attention to more important things' (preposition and noun use). Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, choose correct verbs (forget), use plural forms for countable nouns, and include necessary function words like 'it is' and 'to pay attention to'.

× Honestly sometimes it's not often because I use a note app for remember so I often remember it.

✓ Honestly, I don't forget often because I use a note app to remember things, so I usually recall them.

Problems: 'Honestly sometimes it's not often' is contradictory and awkward—use 'I don't forget often' (tense/structure). 'use a note app for remember' is incorrect verb pattern; after 'for' use noun, but here we need the infinitive 'to remember'. 'so I often remember it' is vague; use plural 'things' and 'usually recall them' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct infinitive 'to remember', keep subject-verb clarity, and match plural references.

× Is it hot only for me to forget it?

✓ Is it only common for me to forget things?

Original 'Is it hot only for me to forget it?' has incorrect word 'hot' (wrong word) and awkward structure. Likely intended 'Is it only me who forgets it?' or 'Is it common only for me to forget things?'. Correction uses 'common' and plural 'things' for clarity. Suggestion: choose appropriate vocabulary ('common' or 'normal') and structure questions as 'Is it only me who ...' or 'Is it common to ...'.

× Maybe I had to, uh, make A to do list because it will, uh, remind me every task I have to do in the day.

✓ Maybe I have to make a to-do list because it will remind me of every task I have to do during the day.

Issues: 'I had to' uses past tense incorrectly if speaking about habit—use present 'I have to' or 'I need to'. 'make A to do list' needs article lowercase 'a' and hyphens 'to-do list'. 'remind me every task' needs preposition 'remind me of every task'. 'in the day' is awkward—use 'during the day'. Suggestion: use present tense for habitual actions, include correct articles and prepositions, and use standard noun forms like 'to-do list'.

× Uh, for example, uh, when I start my daily, uh, my, my work, I often.

✓ For example, when I start my workday, I often check my to-do list.

Original is an incomplete sentence ending with 'I often.' It's unclear 'start my daily'—use 'start my workday'. Provide a complete verb phrase like 'check my to-do list'. Suggestion: complete the clause with a verb and object, and use concise phrasing ('workday').

× I use Nose F which is on mobile phone.

✓ I use an app called Note F on my mobile phone.

Problems: 'Nose F' likely misnamed—assume 'Note F' or 'Note'—and needs article 'an app called'. 'which is on mobile phone' needs 'on my mobile phone' (possessive). Suggestion: name apps as 'an app called X' and include possessive 'my' for personal devices.

× In fact this app will remind me everything I need to do, just check e-mail or have a meeting so I am not worried.

✓ In fact, this app reminds me of everything I need to do, such as checking e-mail or attending meetings, so I am not worried.

Issues: 'will remind me everything' missing preposition 'of' and future 'will' is unnecessary for habitual function—use simple present 'reminds'. 'just check e-mail or have a meeting' should be 'such as checking e-mail or attending meetings' (parallel gerund forms). Suggestion: use present simple for habitual facts, include 'of' after 'remind', and keep parallel structure for examples.