Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer first, then give one or two clear supporting details. Avoid unclear words (e.g. “feisty”) and repetition. Use linking words like “however” or “for example” to make it coherent. Work on grammar: say “I’m not good at” and use correct verb forms and articles.

Exemplo: No, I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget appointments or small tasks because I don’t review them, so I usually set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a specific example of an important thing you forgot and its consequence. Use linking words (“for instance”, “because”) and avoid vague fillers like “I think.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot a doctor’s appointment because I didn’t write it down, which meant I missed an important check-up. Since then, I always add appointments to my calendar.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and relevant reason. Improve by using correct noun forms and more precise phrasing (say “vocabulary” not “vocabularies”), and add a brief detail about how you prioritise words or topics. Use a linking word like “because” or “so” appropriately.

Exemplo: I need to remember a lot of vocabulary because I’m preparing for the IELTS exam. For example, I focus on topic-based words such as education and technology and review them daily to retain them.

Sugestão: This answer is clear and practical. To improve, merge ideas into a smoother structure and add a linking phrase (“for example” or “also”) and one specific detail about the method (which app, or how you review notes). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: It depends, but usually I type schedules into my phone calendar and set reminders so I can check them anytime. I also write short notes in a notebook and review them every evening to make sure I don’t forget important tasks.

× I believe not, I always forget things feisty and I find it hard to memorize things and even ex even important events I normally forget it quickly.

✓ I don't think so; I always forget things easily, and I find it hard to memorize things. Even important events, I normally forget quickly.

Errors: incorrect negation 'I believe not' (use do not think), wrong adverb 'feisty' used instead of 'easily', redundant and awkward phrasing 'even ex even important events', and incorrect pronoun 'it' referring to plural 'events'. Suggestion: Use appropriate negation 'I don't think so', choose correct adverb 'easily', split into shorter sentences for clarity, and ensure pronoun agrees with noun (omit or use 'them').

× I always forget something important really frequently. I think. I find it difficult to remember something, and maybe I'm better at doing things rather than remember things.

✓ I often forget important things. I find it difficult to remember things, and maybe I'm better at doing things rather than remembering them.

Errors: awkward adverb combination 'really frequently' (use 'often'), inconsistent use of 'something important' versus general plural 'important things', and incorrect verb form after 'rather than' ('remember' should be gerund 'remembering'). Also pronoun agreement: use 'them' for plural. Suggestion: Use concise adverbs ('often'), keep number consistent (plural), and use gerund after 'rather than'.

× I need to remember a lot of vocabularies in my daily life because at the moment I'm preparing for my IELTS task, so I really need to remember a huge number of vocabularies.

✓ I need to remember a lot of vocabulary in my daily life because at the moment I'm preparing for my IELTS exam, so I really need to learn a large amount of vocabulary.

Errors: 'vocabularies' is uncountable in this sense; use 'vocabulary' or 'words'. Repetition of 'need to remember' is redundant. 'IELTS task' is incorrect collocation; use 'IELTS exam'. 'Huge number of' is awkward with uncountable noun; use 'a large amount of' or 'many words'. Suggestion: Use correct noun countability and natural collocations ('IELTS exam'), avoid repetition.

× It depends on the things I need to remember. Normally I like typing some schedule on my phone so that I can check my schedule anytime and sometimes I take a note so that I can remember important.

✓ It depends on what I need to remember. Normally I type my schedule into my phone so I can check it anytime, and sometimes I take notes so I can remember important things.

Errors: 'It depends on the things' is awkward; use 'what I need to remember'. 'Typing some schedule' should be 'type my schedule into my phone'. Repetition 'check my schedule' vs 'it' clarity improved by pronoun 'it'. 'Take a note' should be plural 'take notes' for habitual action. 'Remember important' missing noun; use 'important things'. Suggestion: Use natural expressions for routines, correct count (notes), and include necessary nouns.