Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you are good at memorising things, then give one specific short example. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (use past tense and articles). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things. For example, I clearly remember a childhood incident when I fought with my sister over a chocolate I loved, which shows how vividly I recall personal events.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give specific details and explain consequences. Correct tense and pronoun use, and avoid unclear phrases like “white eyes.” Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (e.g., because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot an important date: my mother’s birthday last year. I felt very guilty because it is a special day for both of us, so I apologised and made it up by taking her out for a celebratory dinner.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about what you need to remember daily (e.g., work, appointments). Provide concise reasons and one example of a problem and a solution. Fix grammar and remove repetition.

Exemplo: I need to remember work-related tasks and my schedule every day. For instance, I often forget to wake up on time because my alarm sometimes fails, so I now set two alarms and prepare my bag the night before.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of your methods, then give a specific example and link how it helps. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "use reminders, calendar, notes") and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I use my phone’s calendar and reminder apps to remember important dates. For example, I set an event for my mother’s birthday with an alert two days before, which helps me prepare a gift in time.

× Yes, I have a word forgotten something important for me.

✓ Yes, I have once forgotten something important to me.

The original uses 'have a word forgotten' which is ungrammatical. The present perfect requires 'have' + past participle; use 'have forgotten'. Also 'a word' is incorrect; use 'once' or 'one time', and 'for me' should be 'to me' to indicate possession/importance. Suggestion: use 'I have forgotten' with the past participle and clear time expression.

× That is my mother's birthday.

✓ That was my mother's birthday.

The student is describing a past event (they forgot last year), so the verb should be in the past tense. 'Is' implies present; use 'was' to keep the narrative in the past.

× I last year I forgotten my mother's birthday.

✓ Last year I forgot my mother's birthday.

'Forgotten' is the past participle and needs an auxiliary (have) for present perfect. For a simple past time marker 'last year', use the simple past 'forgot'. Also remove the extra 'I'.

× The white eyes feel so bad because it's a special day for me as well As for my mother.

✓ I felt so bad because it was a special day for both me and my mother.

'The white eyes' is meaningless here—likely a mistranslation. 'Feel' tense should match the past narrative ('felt'), and 'it's' should be past ('it was'). 'As well As for my mother' is awkward; use 'for both me and my mother'. Keep sentence subject and verb consistent.

× Yes, I go back memorising things.

✓ Yes, I often remember things from the past.

'Go back memorising things' is not idiomatic. The student intended to say they recall past memories. Use present simple 'remember' with adverb 'often' or 'sometimes' to express frequency.

× One of them I memorise that in my childhood I could get fight with my sister for one of the chocolate, one of the chocolates which I like too much.

✓ One example I remember is that in my childhood I would fight with my sister over a chocolate that I liked a lot.

Multiple issues: 'memorise' is the wrong verb for recalling an example—use 'remember'. 'Could get fight' is ungrammatical; use 'would fight' or 'used to fight'. 'One of the chocolate' should be 'a chocolate' or 'one of the chocolates'. 'Which I like too much' should be 'that I liked a lot' to keep past tense. Ensure correct article use and verb forms.

× What do you need to remember in your daily life? (Student reply) I need to remember in my daily life for walking because sometimes I forgot to do go on work.

✓ I need to remember things for my daily routine, like leaving for work, because sometimes I forget to go to work.

Use 'need to remember' then object 'things' or 'tasks'. 'For walking' is unclear; likely means 'leaving' or 'going' to work. 'Forgot' should be present simple 'forget' to match habitual action. 'Do go on work' is incorrect—use 'go to work'. Maintain consistent tense and correct preposition 'to work'.

× I slept for the long. I sleep for long.

✓ I slept for a long time. I sleep for a long time.

Use the expression 'for a long time' with 'a'. If referring to a past single occurrence, use 'I slept for a long time.' For habitual statement use present 'I sleep for a long time.' Ensure article 'a' and word order are correct.

× My alarm is not ringing. This is the.

✓ My alarm did not ring. That is the reason.

In context of a past event, 'did not ring' (simple past) is appropriate. 'This is the.' is incomplete; clarify as 'That is the reason' or 'That's why.' Ensure sentences are complete.

× I remember important things by keeper bookmarks in my phone, cell phone in the calendar.

✓ I remember important things by keeping bookmarks and saving notes in my phone calendar.

'By keeper bookmarks' is ungrammatical; use gerund 'keeping'. 'Cell phone in the calendar' is awkward—combine as 'phone calendar'. Use 'saving notes' or 'bookmarks' clearly and correct verb form.

× Set a set a a memorable day for me.

✓ I set reminders for memorable days.

The original repeats 'set' and is ungrammatical. Use plural 'reminders' and correct verb 'set' as part of 'I set reminders'. Keep concise and idiomatic.