Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答应更自然、简洁并符合语法。建议用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支撑。避免语法错误（如“memory things”应为“memorising things”或“good at memory”），注意时态和代词。

Exemplo: Not really. I often forget things quickly, especially details I just read or heard, so I rely on notes to remind myself.

Sugestão: 内容基本明确，但句子中有错误和不自然的表达（如“the president arrived on time”明显用词错误）。建议先直接回答，然后用时间和原因作具体说明，并用连词衔接情节，最后表达感受。

Exemplo: Yes. Last year I forgot my friend’s birthday because I was swamped with work, so I bought a gift online at the last minute and had it delivered the following day. I felt embarrassed but relieved it arrived quickly.

Sugestão: 回答较清楚，但语法和用词需改进（如时态、固定搭配“take part in a check-in activity”，“remember to check in”）。可用一到两句补充说明为什么这很重要并用连词连接。

Exemplo: These days I need to remember to check in daily on an app called Quiet Show, because if I check in every day for two months I can earn a CN¥600 reward.

Sugestão: 表达需要更自然并统一时态，避免混用过去与将来（如“I recalled”与“I will set up”）。建议用主题句说明主要方法，接着举两三个具体步骤，并用连接词使条理清晰。

Exemplo: I usually save important tasks in the Notes app and set alarms or calendar reminders for deadlines, so I get notified in time and don’t forget them.

× No, I'm not good at memory things because I'm always forget what I thought last second, so it is difficult for me to have memory something.

✓ No, I don't have a good memory because I always forget what I thought a moment ago, so it's difficult for me to remember things.

问题类别（26：句子结构错误 / 27：主谓一致相关）和（1：单复数）混合：原句中“good at memory things”用法不自然，应使用固定搭配“have a good memory”或“good at remembering things”；“I'm always forget”动词形式错误，应为“I always forget”或“I'm always forgetting”（涉及主谓/时态）；“last second”更自然为“a moment ago”或“a second ago”；“have memory something”错误的动词搭配，应使用“remember something”。建议：记住常用固定搭配，如“have a good memory”、“forget + (that/what) / forget to do sth.”，并注意动词时态与助动词的搭配，例如用一般现在时“I always forget”。

× Yes, last year I forgot my friend's birthday because I was too busy with my work, so I ordered a gift online at the last minute and had it delivered the next day. I feel embarrassed but relieved when the president arrived on time.

✓ Yes, last year I forgot my friend's birthday because I was too busy with work, so I ordered a gift online at the last minute and had it delivered the next day. I felt embarrassed but relieved when the present arrived on time.

问题类别（5：过去时）和（26：句子结构错误）以及词汇错误：句中“I feel embarrassed but relieved when the president arrived on time.”时态和词汇不一致且用词错误。整个叙述发生在过去，应使用过去时“I felt embarrassed but relieved”。另外“president”是错误的词，应该是“present”（礼物）。建议：叙述过去发生的事情时保持时态一致都用过去时，注意同音词和拼写，复习常见过去时形式。

× Recently I take part in a check in activity in an app called Quiet Show. If I check in for two months I will get a reward for CN¥600. So I need to remember check in every day.

✓ Recently I took part in a check-in activity in an app called Quiet Show. If I check in for two months I will get a reward of CN¥600. So I need to remember to check in every day.

问题类别混合（6：现在时/5：过去时/8：动词+ -ing形式/11：介词或介词短语使用）：句首“Recently I take part”时态不对，应为过去时或现在完成时，改为“took part”或“I've been taking part”。“check in activity”应写作连字符“check-in activity”作为名词；“reward for CN¥600”常用表达为“a reward of CN¥600”；“remember check in”缺少不定式，应为“remember to check in”。建议：注意时间副词与时态的一致性，记住不定式用法“remember to do sth.”以及名词复合词的书写。

× I recalled the important things in the Notes app in my phone and I will set up an alarm to remind me of the deadline. Then I will not forget the important things.

✓ I record the important things in the Notes app on my phone and I set an alarm to remind me of deadlines. Then I won't forget important things.

问题类别（9：过去分词/6：现在时/7：将来时/26：句子结构错误）：原句“I recalled”使用了过去式，但描述的是日常习惯，应使用一般现在时“I record”或“I save/keep a record of important things”；“in my phone”介词应用“on my phone”；“I will set up an alarm”与前句的时态不一致，若描述习惯应改为现在时“I set an alarm”或“If I need to remember I set an alarm”；否定将来缩写应为“won't”。建议：描述习惯用一般现在时，注意介词“on my phone”，以及时态一致性。