Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms (e.g., "I'm not good at memorising things").

Exemplo: I'm not very good at memorising things. So, I keep a digital note on my phone and write a daily to‑do list; this helps me track tasks and reduces the chance of forgetting important items.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer with one specific example and explain what you learned. Use past tense correctly ("forgot" not "have forgot") and avoid unclear or invented words. Use linking words like "so" or "after that."

Exemplo: Yes, I once forgot a dentist appointment. After that, I started setting calendar reminders and booking appointments with automatic confirmation emails, so I never missed one again.

Sugestão: Open with a direct topic sentence and give specific details. Use correct noun and verb forms ("amount of food must be consistent"). Use linking words like "for example" and avoid hesitations. Be concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Exemplo: I need to remember several daily tasks, such as feeding my dog on time. For example, I give him a measured amount of food twice a day because consistent portions help his sensitive stomach and maintain his overall health.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific methods with linking phrases. Use correct forms (e.g., "set up reminders or alarms", "help me remember"). Avoid vague phrases like "organize whatever test."

Exemplo: I usually use my phone to remember important things. For instance, I set calendar reminders and alarms the day before appointments, and I also write a short checklist to prepare any documents or items I will need.

× 'Wow, honestly speaking, I don't have a good memorizing things and my solution is I always have like a digital note on my phone where I can write out the list of what I wanted to do and what tasks I need to complete on a particular day 'cause that way it helped me to have a better better memorizing and.'

✓ 'Wow, honestly, I am not good at memorising things, so I always keep a digital note on my phone where I write the list of what I want to do and the tasks I need to complete on a particular day, because that helps me remember better.'

'Subject-verb agreement and overall sentence structure are incorrect and awkward. The phrase "I don't have a good memorizing things" is ungrammatical; use the adjective phrase "good at memorising things." Change tense consistency: "wanted" should be present "want" to match general habit. "Helped me to have a better better memorizing" is incorrect; use "helps me remember better." Also simplify connectors: use "so" or "because." Suggestion: use clear subject + verb forms and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.'

× 'Yes, I have forgot some dentist appointment in the past and uh, what I did afterwards is have like a no doubt appointment in the, uh, nejito salad where I could avoid forgotting it on the day, uh, which I find it very youthful and have have me have a better.'

✓ 'Yes, I have forgotten a dentist appointment in the past, and afterwards I made a definite appointment at the nearby clinic so I would not forget it on the day, which helped me a lot.'

'Incorrect past participle (forgotten) and past tense usage. "Have forgot" should be present perfect with past participle "have forgotten." "Some dentist appointment" should be "a dentist appointment." "Have like a no doubt appointment" is unclear; use "made a definite appointment." "Nejito salad" seems wrong—assumed 'nearby clinic' to make sense. "Forgotting" is wrong form; use "forget." Ensure consistent past reference and correct past participle forms.'

× 'Well, there are many things that I need to remember in my daily life, but for instance, I need to feed my dog, uh, on the correct term and the amount of food have to be consistent.'

✓ 'Well, there are many things I need to remember in my daily life. For instance, I need to feed my dog at the correct times and the amount of food has to be consistent.'

'Singular and plural issues and subject-verb agreement. "On the correct term" is incorrect; use "at the correct times" (plural) if referring to regular feeding times. "The amount of food have to be consistent" uses plural verb "have" with singular subject "amount"; change to "has to be consistent." Split into two sentences for clarity.'

× 'And these are the thing. It will help him with his, uh, weak, uh, stomach, uh, digestion and also keep, maintain a healthy balanced life for him.'

✓ 'These things will help him with his weak digestion and will help maintain a healthy, balanced life for him.'

'Sentence structure errors and awkward phrasing. "And these are the thing." is ungrammatical; use "These things." "Weak, stomach, digestion" is redundant and misordered—use "weak digestion." Combine ideas into one coherent sentence and use parallel verbs: "will help" and "will help maintain." Also place adjectives in correct order: "healthy, balanced life.'

× 'Wow. I usually have a digital note on my phone or sometime I will set up a reminder or alarm to, uh, give me memorizes better or at least prepare, uh, myself, uh, the day before the appointments, uh, for instance, like I have a dentist appointment the day before.'

✓ 'I usually keep a digital note on my phone, or sometimes I set a reminder or alarm to help me remember better and to prepare myself the day before appointments. For instance, if I have a dentist appointment, the day before I will organise what I need.'

'Present tense consistency and incorrect verb forms. "Sometime" should be "sometimes." "Give me memorizes better" is incorrect; use "help me remember better." "Prepare myself the day before the appointments" needs plural consistency or general phrasing: "appointments." Use present simple for habitual actions (I usually keep, I set). Ensure conditional clause for the example: "if I have a dentist appointment... the day before I will organise what I need."'}]}