Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和拼写，避免重复和冗余，句子结构应更清晰。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relieve stress and relax after a hard day's work.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地描述经历，避免重复，注意冠词和时态的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was about seven years old, my music teacher at primary school taught me how to sing, and I still remember that experience clearly.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意单复数和词汇搭配。

Exemplo: I want to sing for my friends because we are very close, and singing for them is a good way to show my progress and strengthen our friendship. It also helps me relax.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，举例时要具体且连贯。

Exemplo: Definitely yes. For example, during important festivals, people often sing to create a lively atmosphere, and at birthdays, singing is a common way to celebrate.

× Why yes I like saying I think seeing is a good way to alleviate my pressure and it's a very efficient way to release my stress after a hard working pre process.

✓ Why yes, I like singing. I think singing is a good way to alleviate my pressure and it's a very efficient way to release my stress after a hard working process.

动词后面接动名词时，应该使用正确的动名词形式。这里'saying'应为'singing'，且句子中应明确表达喜欢唱歌。'seeing'应改为'singing'，因为上下文是关于唱歌的。

× Why yes I like saying I think seeing is a good way to alleviate my pressure and it's a very efficient way to release my stress after a hard working pre process.

✓ Why yes, I like singing. I think singing is a good way to alleviate my pressure and it's a very efficient way to release my stress after a hard working process.

'a hard working pre process'中的'article'使用错误，'pre process'应为'process'，且前面应加冠词'a'。

× Yes, I recall once a time when I was about 7 years old, I went to primary school and an our music teachers tee taught me how to sing.

✓ Yes, I recall a time when I was about 7 years old. I went to primary school and our music teacher taught me how to sing.

过去时态使用错误，'teachers tee taught'应为'singular teacher taught'，且'tee'是多余的。

× Yes, I recall once a time when I was about 7 years old, I went to primary school and an our music teachers tee taught me how to sing.

✓ Yes, I recall a time when I was about 7 years old. I went to primary school and our music teacher taught me how to sing.

'teachers'应为单数'teacher'，因为后文指的是一位老师。

× I have deep impression impression about that time.

✓ I have a deep impression about that time.

'impression impression'重复，应去掉一个。

× I want to sing for my friends, we are so close, we are best friend and I want to show her my accomplishment and I think this is a good way to strengthen our friendship.

✓ I want to sing for my friends. We are so close; we are best friends and I want to show them my accomplishments. I think this is a good way to strengthen our friendship.

'best friend'应为复数'bests friends'，'her'应改为'them'以对应复数朋友，'accomplishment'应为复数'accomplishments'。

× Also a good way to relaxation.

✓ It's also a good way to relax.

'to relaxation'错误，应该用动词不定式'to relax'。

× Sometimes, for example drawing the important festival people always sing to make the whole atmosphere more activity and in some others birthday other peoples always singing.

✓ Sometimes, for example during important festivals, people always sing to make the whole atmosphere more lively, and on some other birthdays, people always sing.

'drawing the important festival'应为'during important festivals'，'more activity'应为'more lively'，'in some others birthday'应为'on some other birthdays'，'other peoples always singing'应为'people always sing'。