Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để trở nên tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "give" thay vì "gives", và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn như "relax" thay vì "reduce chat". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax after a long day at school. For example, I often sing with my friends, which not only makes me happy but also strengthens our friendships.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên rõ ràng và dễ hiểu hơn. Tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chính xác như "reduce sharing and why" hay "now pressed it singing". Hãy sử dụng các câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic.

Exemplo: Yes, I have tried to learn singing a few times because I am interested in it. Singing helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often sing with my friends while listening to the radio, which improves both my skills and our friendship.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Bạn cũng nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi "Who do you want to sing for?" trước khi giải thích lý do.

Exemplo: I like to sing for my friends because it helps us strengthen our friendship and reduce stress. For example, we often get together during our free time to sing and have fun, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Tránh các lỗi như "it have reduced yet" hay "squawk" không phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng các câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và có liên kết logic để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps reduce stress after a long day. For example, when I sing, I feel relaxed and can forget my problems temporarily. Singing can improve our mood and create a positive feeling.

× I often singing with my friends not only make me happy or but also give me the chance to improve friendship relationship.

✓ I often sing with my friends not only to make me happy but also to give me the chance to improve friendship relationships.

The verb 'singing' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'sing' after 'often'. Also, 'make' should be 'to make' to match the infinitive form, and 'friendship relationship' should be plural 'friendship relationships' for correctness.

× I am excited about singing because it give me the chance to reduce chat after all day school.

✓ I am excited about singing because it gives me the chance to reduce stress after a whole day at school.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'reduce chat' is incorrect; 'reduce stress' is more appropriate, and 'all day school' should be 'a whole day at school'.

× I often now pressed it singing with my friend with only radio chat, but also improve my skill and improve relationship friendship.

✓ I often now practice singing with my friend with only radio chat, which also improves my skills and improves friendship relationships.

'Pressed it singing' is incorrect; 'practice singing' is correct. Also, 'improve' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject, and 'relationship friendship' should be 'friendship relationships'.

× I really enjoy singing with my friends because it help us strengthen our friendship and reduce stress.

✓ I really enjoy singing with my friends because it helps us strengthen our friendship and reduce stress.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× which make me feel more relaxed and happy.

✓ which makes me feel more relaxed and happy.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'which'.

× Yes, definitely I think singing can bring happiness to people because it have reduced yet after a long day squawk.

✓ Yes, definitely I think singing can bring happiness to people because it has reduced stress after a long day of work.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'squawk' is incorrect; 'work' or 'stress' is appropriate.

× For example, I when I sing I make me feel relax and unwind, all allowing me to temporarily forget about my problem.

✓ For example, when I sing, it makes me feel relaxed and unwind, allowing me to temporarily forget about my problems.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'I when I sing I make me feel' should be 'when I sing, it makes me feel'. Also, 'relax' should be 'relaxed', and 'problem' should be plural 'problems'.

× Additional singing cannot push our moods and create a sense.

✓ Additionally, singing can improve our moods and create a sense of happiness.

'Additional singing cannot push our moods' is incorrect; 'Additionally, singing can improve our moods' is correct. Also, 'create a sense' is incomplete; it should specify 'a sense of happiness' or similar.