Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to use the present tense consistently since the question is about your current liking. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then explain why you like singing with specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like singing because it allows me to express my feelings effectively. Moreover, singing helps me relax and enjoy my free time.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and sentence structure, especially with negative forms and past experiences. Also, clarify your ideas with linking words and avoid awkward phrasing. Be specific about what you do to learn singing.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing, but I watch many concerts to observe how artists perform. In my free time, I try to practice singing by imitating their style.

Sugestão: Use the present tense to express your current desire. Also, explain your choice with more specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I want to sing for the A and Haryanvi music industry because it is a growing sector in India, and I believe it offers many opportunities for new artists.

Sugestão: Focus on correct grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and plural forms. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them express their feelings. For example, when someone feels depressed, singing can be a way to overcome their sadness.

× Yes, Sir, I really like singing when I was a child.

✓ Yes, Sir, I really liked singing when I was a child.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child'), so the verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to maintain tense consistency.

× I love to sing and it is because I think that from singing you can express your feeling in a good way.

✓ I love to sing because I think that through singing you can express your feelings in a good way.

The phrase 'it is because' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'because' alone suffices. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' as it refers to emotions in general. 'From singing' is better expressed as 'through singing' to indicate the medium of expression.

× No, I don't have ever learnt how to sing, but I see many singers concerts the way that how the artists sing and I try in my free time how to sing.

✓ No, I have never learnt how to sing, but I watch many singers' concerts to see how the artists sing and I try to sing in my free time.

The correct present perfect negative form is 'I have never learnt' instead of 'I don't have ever learnt'. 'See' should be 'watch' when referring to concerts. 'Singers concerts' needs possessive form 'singers'' and 'the way that how' is redundant; 'to see how' is correct. 'I try in my free time how to sing' is awkward; 'I try to sing in my free time' is correct.

× I wanted to sing for A and Haryanvi music industry because it is a growing industry in India.

✓ I want to sing for the A and Haryanvi music industry because it is a growing industry in India.

The question is in present tense 'Who do you want to sing for?', so the answer should be in present tense 'I want' instead of past tense 'I wanted'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'A and Haryanvi music industry' as it refers to a specific industry.

× Yasu singing can bring happiness to people's because when they feel depressed I think that they have to sing to express their feelings and it help many people's to overcome their depression.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because when they feel depressed, I think that they have to sing to express their feelings and it helps many people to overcome their depression.

'Yasu' is corrected to 'Yes'. 'People's' is incorrect possessive form; it should be 'people' as plural noun. 'It help' should be 'it helps' to agree with singular subject. Also, a comma is needed after 'depressed' for clarity.