Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly. For example, explain how singing helps you relax or refresh your mind, and avoid confusing phrases like "turns my brain" or "combine brain." Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and refresh my mind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and could be more natural. Use the correct tense and structure, and provide a clear reason. For example, say "I have never learned how to sing because I am not interested in it." Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I am not very interested in singing. I just enjoy listening to music.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to answer who you want to sing for, such as family, friends, or an audience. Also, use simple and clear sentences to express your ideas.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my family because they always support me and enjoy my singing.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors and repetition. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent, and correct the grammar. For example, say "I think singing can bring happiness because it helps people relax and forget their busy lives for a while."

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps them relax and forget their stressful lives for some time.

× I like singing because it turns my brain and due to my hectic schedule it plays a role to combine brain.

✓ I like singing because it refreshes my brain and, due to my hectic schedule, it helps to relax my mind.

The phrase 'turns my brain' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'refreshes my brain'. Also, 'plays a role to combine brain' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'helps to relax my mind'. The verb forms and expressions need to be appropriate and idiomatic.

× I never learn how to sing because I never interested in singing.

✓ I have never learned how to sing because I have never been interested in singing.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense 'have never learned' to indicate an experience up to now. Also, 'never interested' needs the auxiliary verb 'have been' to form the present perfect passive 'have never been interested'.

× I only enjoy the music by listening.

✓ I only enjoy music by listening.

The article 'the' before 'music' is unnecessary here; 'music' is an uncountable noun used generally. Also, 'by listening' is correct but could be more natural without 'the'.

× I want to sing for a good like subscription songs which relates to me with a good.

✓ I want to sing good songs that relate to me.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'A good like subscription songs' is incorrect; it should be 'good songs'. 'Which relates to me with a good' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'that relate to me'. The sentence structure needs simplification and correction.

× I think singing can bring happiness to the people because by singing they can relax their mind and when they singing they they forget their hectic life for some time.

✓ I think singing can bring happiness to people because by singing they can relax their minds and when they sing, they forget their hectic lives for some time.

The phrase 'when they singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when they sing' (simple present tense). Also, 'their mind' should be plural 'their minds' to agree with plural subject 'they'. 'Their hectic life' should be 'their hectic lives' for the same reason.