Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and using correct grammar. For example, instead of saying 'But I like singing, but I can't sing,' say 'I like singing, but I'm not very good at it.' Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I like singing, but I'm not very good at it. However, I still enjoy singing because it helps me relax and feel happy.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Avoid hesitation and repetition. For example, say 'I have never learned how to sing because I am shy and not confident, but I would like to learn someday.'

Exemplo: I have never learned how to sing because I am shy and not confident. However, I would like to learn singing in the future to improve my skills.

Sugestão: Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, instead of 'I couldn't have the encourage,' say 'I don't have the courage.' Also, use linking words to make your answer more logical.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my husband because he often asks me to. However, I am shy and don't have the courage to sing in front of him. Therefore, I am trying to learn singing so I can sing for him one day.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas with linking words. For example, say 'Singing can definitely bring happiness because music connects with our emotions, especially when we feel sad or down.'

Exemplo: Singing can definitely bring happiness to people. For instance, when we feel sad, listening to songs that connect with our emotions can comfort us and make us feel better.

× But I like singing, but I Can't Sing, you know, my work.

✓ I like singing, but I can't sing well, you know, because of my work.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'but' twice consecutively, which is redundant. Also, 'Can't Sing' should be 'can't sing' with lowercase letters. The phrase 'my work' is unclear and needs clarification; adding 'because of my work' makes the meaning clearer.

× I'm not good at vocalizing.

✓ I'm not good at singing.

The word 'vocalizing' is less common and sounds awkward here. 'Singing' is the more appropriate and natural term in this context.

× And singing can give you relax, man, Relaxance and happiness.

✓ And singing can give you relaxation and happiness.

'Relax' is a verb, so it cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'relaxation'. Also, 'Relaxance' is not a correct English word. The word 'man' is informal and unnecessary in this context.

× Not really. I never learned how to sing because I'm not good at it.

✓ Not really. I have never learned how to sing because I'm not good at it.

Since the action relates to the past with relevance to the present, the present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'never learned'.

× But I'd like to know how to sing because I'm, I'm very, I'm a shy person, so it, it's not for me to sing, you know?

✓ But I'd like to know how to sing because I'm a very shy person, so singing is not for me, you know?

The sentence has unnecessary repetition and awkward phrasing. Removing repeated words and restructuring improves clarity and grammar.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Whom do you want to sing for?

'Whom' is the correct object pronoun to use after the preposition 'for' in formal English.

× I actually want to sing for my husband.

✓ I actually want to sing for my husband.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× He always asks me to sing for him but I'm a shy person so I couldn't have the encourage to sing for him.

✓ He always asks me to sing for him, but I'm a shy person, so I don't have the courage to sing for him.

'Encourage' is a verb, but the sentence needs the noun 'courage'. Also, 'couldn't have' is incorrect here; 'don't have' fits the present context better.

× That's why I learned to sing and I will try my best to sing for him.

✓ That's why I am learning to sing and I will try my best to sing for him.

Since the action is ongoing, present continuous 'am learning' is more appropriate than simple past 'learned'.

× Of course it it can brings happiness to our life.

✓ Of course it can bring happiness to our life.

After modal verb 'can', the base form of the verb 'bring' should be used, not 'brings'. Also, 'it it' is a repetition error.

× For example, when we are feeling down, we can hear songs that are actually emotionally connected with us.

✓ For example, when we are feeling down, we can listen to songs that are emotionally connected with us.

'Hear' means to perceive sound passively, while 'listen to' implies active attention, which fits better here.

× Sometimes we get emotional with this song, sad songs, and it is deeply connected with our emotions.

✓ Sometimes we get emotional with these songs, sad songs, and they are deeply connected with our emotions.

'This song' is singular, but 'sad songs' is plural, so pronouns should agree in number: 'these songs' and 'they'.