Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and filler words. Use clear linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why singing makes you happy and energised. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'makes me comfort' to 'makes me feel comfortable'.

Exemplo: Yes, I do enjoy singing. I often sing when I'm alone at home because it is a hobby close to my heart. It helps me relax and break away from my daily routine, which makes me feel happy and energised.

Sugestão: Avoid unnecessary phrases like 'That's a great question' and focus on directly answering the question. Use correct grammar such as 'makes me feel comfortable' and 'makes me feel energised'. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally because I see it as a hobby rather than a career. I usually sing alone at home, which helps me feel comfortable and lifts my mood.

Sugestão: Try to be more specific and clear in your answer. Use correct grammar such as 'makes me feel comfortable' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, explain why you want to sing for Ajit Singh and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for many people, but especially for Ajit Singh because I admire him greatly. His songs make me feel comfortable and help lift my mood when I am sad or stressed.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like 'feel them comfort'. Instead, say 'feel comfortable'. Also, explain your ideas with specific examples or reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because many see it as a hobby rather than a job. Singing alone or with others helps them break from their daily routine, feel energised, and enjoy the company of others, which makes them happy.

× It makes me comfort and come out of the normal life, normal daily routine, which makes me happy, umm, more uh, energizing.

✓ It makes me comfortable and helps me come out of normal life, normal daily routine, which makes me happy and more energized.

The adjective 'comfort' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'comfortable' to describe a feeling. Also, 'come out' needs a helping verb 'helps me' to be grammatically correct. 'Energizing' is a present participle used incorrectly; 'more energized' is the correct adjective form to describe the feeling.

× It keeps my mind, uh.

✓ It keeps my mind active.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an adjective or complement after 'keeps my mind'. Adding 'active' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× No, I haven't learned about singing yet because I consider singing as a hobby, not like a profession.

✓ No, I haven't learned to sing yet because I consider singing a hobby, not a profession.

The phrase 'learned about singing' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'learned to sing'. Also, 'consider singing as a hobby' should be 'consider singing a hobby' without 'as'. 'Not like a profession' should be 'not a profession' for correct comparison.

× It makes me feel comfort and lift my mood eventually and it make me energized and.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable and lifts my mood eventually, and it makes me energized.

'Feel comfort' should be 'feel comfortable' to use the correct adjective. 'Lift' should be 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Make' should be 'makes' for subject-verb agreement. The sentence was incomplete and needed proper conjunctions and punctuation.

× I want a lot of person to sing for, but firstly I would say Ajit Singh.

✓ I want to sing for a lot of people, but firstly I would say Ajit Singh.

'A lot of person' is incorrect; the plural form 'people' should be used. Also, the sentence structure is improved by placing 'to sing for' after 'I want'.

× I'm a big fan of him.

✓ I'm a big fan of his.

The correct possessive pronoun after 'fan of' is 'his', not the object pronoun 'him'.

× I love his songs, which makes me feel comfort and help me to lift my mood when I'm sad, when I'm uh, stressed, when I'm depressed, uh, when I used to listen to his songs.

✓ I love his songs, which make me feel comfortable and help me lift my mood when I'm sad, stressed, or depressed, especially when I listen to his songs.

'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'songs'. 'Feel comfort' should be 'feel comfortable'. 'Help me to lift' is better as 'help me lift'. 'When I used to listen' is incorrect; 'especially when I listen' is more appropriate for habitual action.

× So which which bring happiness to them when they sing alone or when they sing with a group of peoples, we help them to come out of the normal daily routine and make them energized and feel them comfort around the people and makes them happy.

✓ So which brings happiness to them when they sing alone or with a group of people, helping them come out of the normal daily routine, making them energized and feel comfortable around others, and making them happy.

'Which which' is a repetition error; one 'which' should be used. 'Bring' should be 'brings' to agree with singular 'which'. 'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Feel them comfort' should be 'feel comfortable'. The sentence structure is complex and benefits from rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.