Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并避免重复和语法错误。

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me express my emotions and relax during my free time. Also, singing funny songs can make my friends laugh and enjoy themselves.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地说明学习唱歌的经历，并补充具体细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in junior school. My music teacher taught me proper techniques and helped me practice romantic songs, which I really enjoyed.

Sugestão: 回答有重复且语法错误，建议简洁表达想为母亲唱歌的原因，并使用连词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my mom because when I was a child, she often sang peaceful songs to me before bedtime, which helped me relax.

Sugestão: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用更准确的词汇和连词，清楚表达唱歌带来快乐的原因。

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because positive songs can convey emotions that help people feel relaxed and enthusiastic, creating a positive atmosphere.

× And I see him because sometimes I was saying it becomes a way that I can express my emotions and make me relax during my pleasure time.

✓ And I think so because sometimes I say it becomes a way that I can express my emotions and make me relax during my leisure time.

这里时态使用错误，原句中使用了过去进行时“was saying”，但表达的是一般现在时的习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“say”。另外，'pleasure time' 应改为 'leisure time'，更符合表达休闲时间的习惯用法。

× And it also can see in a funny way to make my friends laugh.

✓ And it can also be seen in a funny way to make my friends laugh.

原句中“can see”用法错误，应使用被动语态“can be seen”来表达“它也可以以一种有趣的方式被看到”。

× When I was studying in a Junior School, I used to have a music class and teachers in the class taught me how how to sing in a really romantic way and the correct way and so that I learned my lovely song and then.

✓ When I was studying in Junior School, I used to have music class and the teachers taught me how to sing in a really romantic and correct way, so I learned my lovely songs then.

原句中“a Junior School”应去掉冠词“a”，因为“Junior School”作为学校名称或类型时通常不加冠词。重复了“how”。“music class”前不需要冠词。句子结构不够连贯，需调整连接词和标点。

× The person I'd like to sing for is basically my mom because when I was a child my mom, my mom was saying, sang a lot of song for me and before my bedtime she always saw a really peaceful song which makes me really relaxed.

✓ The person I'd like to sing for is basically my mom because when I was a child, my mom sang a lot of songs for me, and before my bedtime she always sang a really peaceful song which made me really relaxed.

“was saying”用法错误，应改为“sang”。“a lot of song”应为复数“a lot of songs”。“she always saw”应为“she always sang”，动词错误。时态应保持一致，过去时。

× Of course you are seeing a really positive song, people can feel the emotion in your song and then be relaxed and enthusiasm too, because singing always can bring positive attitude for people and that makes people really moved by this.

✓ Of course, when you sing a really positive song, people can feel the emotion in your song and then be relaxed and enthusiastic too, because singing can always bring a positive attitude to people and that makes people really moved by it.

“you are seeing a really positive song”表达不当，应为“when you sing a really positive song”。“enthusiasm”应为形容词“enthusiastic”。“bring positive attitude for people”应为“bring a positive attitude to people”。“moved by this”应为“moved by it”。