Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid filler words and improve fluency by practising more.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it allows me to express my inner feelings through words. Although my voice is not very good, I enjoy singing alone at home as it helps me relax and feel happy.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating previous answers and reduce hesitation sounds like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Provide more specific details about your experience or feelings about learning to sing.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learnt how to sing because I feel my voice is not very good. However, during family gatherings, we often sing together for fun, and I would love to improve my singing skills someday.

Sugestão: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas. Be specific about why you want to sing for your parents.

Exemplo: If I get a chance, I would definitely sing for my parents because they have done so much for me. Singing would be the best way to express my gratitude and love towards them.

Sugestão: Try to avoid hesitation and repetition. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'because' to make your answer more coherent. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it acts like therapy. For example, many people sing to relieve stress and feel more relaxed after a long day.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In English (India), 'learned' is the more commonly used past participle form of 'learn' in formal contexts, especially in questions using present perfect tense. 'Learnt' is also acceptable but less common in Indian English.

× So no, I never, uh, learn how to sing.

✓ So no, I never learned how to sing.

The sentence refers to a past action that did not happen, so the past tense 'learned' should be used instead of the base form 'learn' to maintain correct tense agreement.

× at home sometimes we get, we get there, uh, family gather, we all sing together, uh, for just fun.

✓ At home sometimes we get together, uh, family gathers, we all sing together, uh, just for fun.

The phrase 'family gather' is incorrect because 'family' as a singular collective noun requires the singular verb 'gathers'. Also, 'get there' is unnecessary and confusing; 'get together' is the correct phrase to indicate meeting.

× I think it it would be a best way to express my inner feelings for them

✓ I think it would be the best way to express my inner feelings for them

The phrase 'a best way' is incorrect because 'best' is a superlative adjective and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' to indicate the highest degree.

× They, uh, used to go to different places and uh, for their, to, to relieve stress.

✓ They, uh, used to go to different places to relieve stress.

The phrase 'and uh, for their, to, to relieve stress' is redundant and incorrectly structured. The correct preposition is 'to' followed by the verb 'relieve' to express purpose.