Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some redundancy and awkward phrasing, such as "singing songs" and "relax, relax myself." Try to be more concise and natural by avoiding repeated words and improving sentence flow. Also, clarify the last part about going to the UH Songs Club for better coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and unwind. I often sing with my parents, and we sometimes go to a local singing club called UH Songs Club to practice together.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward expressions, such as "attending to the songs classes" and "acquire skills of singing songs." Try to use simpler and more natural phrases, and avoid repeating "singing songs." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned to sing when I was a child because my parents encouraged me. They enrolled me in singing classes and a club, which helped me develop my singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "seeing for them feel special" and "can supportive." Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it makes them feel special and appreciated. Their support motivates me to improve, and sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Your answer contains several errors, including confusing word choices like "saying" instead of "singing," and unclear phrases such as "stimulated tones." Try to express your ideas more clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because different tones and melodies can affect our emotions. For example, upbeat songs can lift our mood and make us feel more positive and relaxed.

× Actually, when I was a child, my parents encouraged me to learn singing songs.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, my parents encouraged me to learn to sing songs.

The verb 'encouraged me to learn' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'to sing' rather than the gerund 'singing'. Using 'to learn to sing' is the correct infinitive form after 'learn' in this context.

× They encouraged me by attending to the songs classes and attend a club which made me acquire skills of singing songs.

✓ They encouraged me by attending the songs classes and attending a club which helped me acquire skills in singing songs.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'attending'; it should be omitted. Also, parallel structure requires 'attending' in both cases. 'Helped me acquire skills in singing songs' is more natural than 'made me acquire skills of singing songs'.

× Uh, I would like to sing for my family and close friends, seeing for them feel special because they can supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivate me to perform better.

✓ Uh, I would like to sing for my family and close friends, seeing them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my efforts, which motivate me to perform better.

The phrase 'seeing for them feel special' is incorrect; it should be 'seeing them feel special'. Also, 'they can supportive' is incorrect; it should be 'they are supportive'. These corrections fix pronoun and verb usage errors.

× Moreover, sharing music with loved ones create a warm and joyful atmosphere.

✓ Moreover, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and joyful atmosphere.

The subject 'sharing music' is singular, so the verb should be 'creates' not 'create'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to verb form, but since the problem is with verb form, it fits under subject-verb agreement (ID 27). However, as per instructions, only correct mistakes that meet the listed types; subject-verb agreement is ID 27, so this correction is valid.

× Well I think saying can bring happiness to people but it depends on different tones of things.

✓ Well, I think singing can bring happiness to people, but it depends on different tones of things.

The word 'saying' is incorrect here; it should be 'singing' to match the context. This is a word choice error affecting meaning, categorized under incorrect use of pronouns or word choice. Also, commas are added for clarity.

× You know when you hear a stimulated tones of the songs you made, bring your happiness and bring well-being to you.

✓ You know, when you hear stimulating tones of the songs you made, they bring you happiness and well-being.

'Stimulated tones' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'stimulating' to describe tones that cause a reaction. Also, the sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.