Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Correct tense and pronoun use, and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, after a long day at school I often sing for 20 minutes to unwind and clear my mind.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give one clear supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Mention a specific activity and time constraints briefly.

Exemplo: No, I haven't had formal lessons. I usually practice by singing along to karaoke videos on YouTube or TikTok because I don't have time for proper coaching.

Sugestão: Provide a direct topic sentence and one concrete reason with improved grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'better thinking.'

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself because it helps me relax and reflect. For instance, singing alone after studying makes me feel refreshed and more positive.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then give one specific reason and an example. Use smoother linking words (for example, because) and correct noun/verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it releases emotions and reduces stress. For example, people often feel uplifted when they sing their favorite song with friends.

× Yes I do because whenever I sing it feel relaxing and it's made me call myself and also like I could spending time for myself with myself more because as a high school student that doesn't really have time for myself it would be really great.

✓ Yes, I do because whenever I sing it feels relaxing and it helps me calm myself; I can also spend more time alone, which is great because as a high school student I don't really have much time for myself.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and present tense ('it feel' -> 'it feels'), incorrect verb phrase 'it's made me call myself' should be 'it helps me calm myself' for meaning and correct verb usage, incorrect gerund form 'could spending' -> 'can spend', tense consistency 'doesn't really have' kept in present. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with their subjects, use correct present simple forms for habitual actions, replace awkward idioms with standard phrasing such as 'calm myself' and 'spend time alone'.

× No because normally I would just play a karaoke songs on my YouTube videos and sing along the with the videos or maybe with the TikTok things that have like a really video so I will sing along with them.

✓ No, because normally I would just play karaoke songs on YouTube and sing along with the videos or maybe with TikTok clips that have music, so I sing along with them.

Errors: unnecessary article and plural mismatch 'a karaoke songs' -> 'karaoke songs', incorrect word order 'sing along the with' -> 'sing along with', awkward 'TikTok things that have like a really video' simplified to 'TikTok clips that have music'. Also tense/modal consistency: use 'would' for habitual past or conditional but 'I sing along' present-tense habitual is clearer as 'I sing along'. Suggestion: Use correct articles and prepositions, remove filler words like 'like' and restructure for clarity.

× I never have time to ever learn to sing properly.

✓ I never have time to learn to sing properly.

Error: Redundant adverb 'ever' with 'never' is unnecessary. Keep present simple 'never have time' to describe habitual lack of time. Suggestion: Avoid double negatives/redundancies; choose one negative adverb.

× I would say that I want to sing for myself because whenever I sings it just make me feel relaxed and I know how to improve myself for a better thinking or just enjoying myself.

✓ I would say that I want to sing for myself because whenever I sing it just makes me feel relaxed, and I know how to improve myself to think more positively or just enjoy myself.

Errors: third person singular forms — 'whenever I sings' should be 'whenever I sing' (subject 'I' uses base form), 'it just make' -> 'it just makes' for subject-verb agreement. Also awkward phrase 'improve myself for a better thinking' corrected to 'improve myself to think more positively'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms with subject 'I' and ensure verbs agree with singular subjects; rephrase vague expressions into clearer ones.

× Yes, I do. Personally, I think that singing can definitely bring happiness to people throughout the relief, the song or the emotion that we get from the song. And also it can be really, really great to just enjoying the music with a passion that you love.

✓ Yes, I do. Personally, I think that singing can definitely bring happiness to people through the relief, the melody, or the emotions we get from a song. Also, it can be really great to just enjoy music with a passion you love.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'throughout' should be 'through' when indicating means, awkward noun choices 'the song or the emotion' -> 'the melody, or the emotions', gerund misuse 'to just enjoying' -> 'to just enjoy'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions, choose precise nouns, and use the infinitive after 'to' rather than a gerund in this construction.