Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь говорить более сжато и без повторов, избегайте междометий («uh») и используйте связки для плавности. Дайте одно-два конкретных примера того, как пение помогает вам (например, после трудного дня или при подготовке к событию), чтобы ответ стал более содержательным и естественным.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and lift my mood after a stressful day. For example, when I feel anxious about exams, singing my favourite songs calms me and gives me more energy to focus.

Sugestão: Уточняйте детали и используйте связки для логичности. Вместо общих фраз назовите, какие навыки вы развивали (дыхание, тональность, постановка голоса) и как долго учились, чтобы ответ был конкретным и убедительным.

Exemplo: Yes, I took private singing lessons for about a year. During the lessons I practised breathing techniques, pitch control and vocal exercises because I wanted to develop the skills needed to record my own song.

Sugestão: Больше конкретики: опишите тип аудитории и почему именно она. Избегайте пауз и лишних «uh». Используйте связку для объяснения причины, например «because» или «so that», чтобы показать связь между вашими целями и аудиторией.

Exemplo: I would like to sing for young adults who enjoy indie and acoustic music, because they tend to appreciate thoughtful lyrics and emotional performances. Singing for this audience would help me connect with people who share my views.

Sugestão: Давайте более ясные и конкретные объяснения: приведите примеры, как пение влияет на людей (например, объединяет людей на концертах, поднимает настроение). Уберите лишние повторения и заполнители, используйте связки «for example», «because», «so» для логичности.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it creates a sense of community and lifts spirits. For example, singing at a concert or even karaoke can bring strangers together and make everyone feel more joyful.

× Yes, I really like singing because it's a kind of psychological relief for me and uh, it helps me to feel more, uh, to more glad, more relieved, more inspired and uh, it's a kind of expressing my feelings.

✓ Yes, I really like singing because it's a kind of psychological relief for me and it helps me to feel more glad, more relieved, more inspired, and it is a way of expressing my feelings.

The original contains redundancy and awkward verb forms. 'to more glad' is incorrect; use 'more glad' (adjective) without 'to'. 'it's a kind of expressing my feelings' is ungrammatical — use 'a way of expressing my feelings' or 'a means of expressing my feelings'. Also replace repeated 'uh' and use consistent pronouns ('it' instead of 'it' and 'it is'). Suggestions: remove filler words, avoid 'to' before adjectives, and use 'a way of' + gerund for 'kind of' expressions.

× Yes, actually I went to the special singing classes.

✓ Yes, actually I went to special singing classes.

Using the definite article 'the' implies specific classes already known to the listener; here it's generic so omit 'the' or say 'the special singing class' if referring to one specific class. Suggestion: use 'special singing classes' for general past attendance.

× I learned how to sing and my aim was to record my own song.

✓ I learned how to sing and my aim was to record my own songs.

Singular 'song' is possible but 'record my own song' sounds odd unless referring to one specific song; plural 'songs' is more natural when speaking generally. No tense change needed. Suggestion: use plural when talking about creating music in general.

× And so I needed special skills and to train my ways.

✓ So I needed special skills and had to train in certain techniques.

'to train my ways' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'had to' + base verb for necessity in past ('needed' + infinitive duplication is awkward), or rephrase: 'needed special skills and had to train in certain techniques' or 'needed special skills and training'. Suggestion: use 'had to train' or 'needed training' and replace vague 'ways' with 'techniques' or 'methods'.

× Well, I'd like to sing to a certain kind of audience that share my taste in music, my thoughts, my, uh, attitude to some things and uh, I'm sure that they will like it.

✓ Well, I'd like to sing for a certain kind of audience that shares my taste in music, my thoughts, and my attitude toward some things, and I'm sure they will like it.

Use 'sing for' rather than 'sing to' for performing for an audience. 'Audience that share' must agree: 'audience that shares' or 'audiences that share'; here 'audience' is singular collective so 'shares'. 'Attitude to' is acceptable in British English but 'attitude toward' is more common; maintain consistency. Also remove filler 'uh' and streamline the sentence. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and choose correct preposition for 'sing for'.

× Yes, I'm convinced that people who sing really brings some kind of joy to others and, uh, some kind of reflection on, uh, such things as love as uh, uh, happiness.

✓ Yes, I'm convinced that people who sing really bring some kind of joy to others and some reflection on things like love and happiness.

Subject 'people' is plural, so verb should be 'bring' not 'brings'. Remove redundant 'some kind of' repetitions and fillers 'uh'. 'Reflection on such things as love as happiness' is ungrammatical; use 'things like love and happiness'. Suggestion: ensure plural subjects take plural verbs and simplify repetitive phrases.