Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь говорить грамматически правильно и логично: используйте простые конструкции настоящего времени, избегайте лишних слов и повторов. Начните с короткого тематического предложения, затем добавьте одно-две конкретные причины. Например: «Yes, I love singing because it relaxes me and helps me express my emotions.» Также обратите внимание на согласование глаголов (I sing, not I singing) и порядок слов.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, after a long day I often sing along to my favorite songs to unwind.

Sugestão: Исправьте смысл и грамматику: ясно отвечайте на вопрос «учились ли вы пению». Используйте отрицание корректно и объясните, как вы развивали голос — простыми, связными предложениями. Добавляйте примеры и детали, используя связки (because, so, for example).

Exemplo: No, I haven't had formal singing lessons. Instead, I learn by listening to music on the radio and TV and practising by repeating songs every day, which helps me improve my pitch and timing.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте мысль ясно и грамматически правильно: скажите, для кого вы поёте и почему. Избегайте бессвязных фраз («I hurt my soul», «I wanna learn you») и используйте связки (because, so, therefore). Дайте конкретную причину и, при необходимости, пример.

Exemplo: I prefer to sing for myself rather than for an audience because singing relaxes me and helps me clear my mind. For example, I often sing alone at home after work to relieve stress.

Sugestão: Будьте точнее и используйте подходящую лексику: вместо «break happiness» используйте «bring happiness». Дайте связную причину и пример, используйте связки (because, for example, also). Старайтесь избегать повторов и неверных словосочетаний.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because music can lift your mood and make you smile. For example, a cheerful song at a party often gets people dancing and laughing.

× I just love singing because when I singing I feel so comfortable with this music and every day when I listen to music I so have singing.

✓ I just love singing because when I sing I feel so comfortable with the music, and every day when I listen to music I feel like singing.

Error involves incorrect verb form after 'when' (should be base form 'sing' not 'singing') and awkward phrasing 'I so have singing'. Use 'feel like singing' to express desire. Also use definite article 'the' before 'music' when referring to specific experience. Suggestion: use base verb after time conjunctions (when I sing), and common collocations like 'feel like singing'.

× Of course, no, I haven't learned how to think because I just listen to musics on TV, on radio and I repeat that and I like that doing everyday.

✓ Of course not, I haven't learned how to sing because I just listen to music on TV and on the radio, I repeat it, and I like doing that every day.

Several tense and word choice issues: 'no' should be 'not' in this context; 'learned how to think' is incorrect — intended 'learn how to sing'; 'musics' is uncountable and should be 'music'; 'on radio' needs article 'the radio'; 'repeat that' better as 'repeat it'; 'doing everyday' should be 'doing that every day'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'sing', treat 'music' as uncountable, include articles where needed, and place 'every day' after verb phrase.

× I don't want to sing for other people, just I want to singing for me because when I was singing I feel so relaxed and so comfortable and I hurt my soul.

✓ I don't want to sing for other people; I just want to sing for myself because when I sing I feel relaxed and comfortable and it heals my soul.

Incorrect use of '-ing' after 'want to' (should be base form 'want to sing'). Tense inconsistency: 'when I was singing I feel' mixes past and present — use present 'when I sing I feel'. 'I hurt my soul' likely intended positive meaning 'heals my soul'; use correct verb. Also use 'myself' instead of 'me' for reflexive emphasis. Suggestion: use base verb after 'want to', keep consistent present tense for habitual actions, and choose verbs that convey intended meaning.

× Only voice.

✓ Only my voice.

'Only voice' lacks determiner/pronoun; 'my voice' specifies possession. Single-word fragment is unclear. Use 'my voice' to complete the idea. Suggestion: include a possessive pronoun when referring to one's own voice.

× I just love my voice and every day I wanna learn you.

✓ I just love my voice and every day I want to learn to sing better.

'wanna learn you' is incorrect: 'learn' is transitive but 'learn someone' is not used; likely intended 'learn to sing' or 'learn from you'. Use 'want to' instead of informal 'wanna'. Add 'better' if improving singing is meant. Suggestion: use 'learn to' + verb for acquiring a skill, and avoid colloquial contractions in formal responses.

× Yeah, I think singing can break happiness of people because when you listen to so funny, so happiness music, you're smiling and advancing other people.

✓ Yeah, I think singing can bring happiness to people because when you listen to very funny, happy music, you smile and cheer up other people.

'Can break happiness' is wrong collocation; should be 'bring happiness'. 'So funny, so happiness music' is ungrammatical — use 'very funny, happy music'. 'You're smiling and advancing other people' is incorrect; 'cheer up other people' or 'make others smile' conveys meaning. Suggestion: learn correct collocations ('bring happiness', 'cheer up') and adjective order.

× And then it's depends. That's music, this lyric when you listen.

✓ And then it depends on the song and the lyrics you listen to.

'It's depends' is incorrect verb structure; use 'it depends'. Fragment 'That's music, this lyric when you listen' is ungrammatical. Combine into a full sentence: 'It depends on the song and the lyrics.' Suggestion: use 'it depends on' + noun phrase and avoid sentence fragments; ensure verbs agree with subject.