Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and correct small errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Also correct the word choice (“acrostic” should be a music genre or “acoustic”) and avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat ‘I don’t really like singing’).

Exemplo: I don't really enjoy singing because I feel my voice doesn't suit it. However, I love listening to music, especially pop and acoustic songs, because they help me relax.

Sugestão: Use a direct topic sentence and improve grammar and fluency. Replace clumsy phrasing ('interested to learn singing') with natural expressions, and add a linking word to explain why you want to learn. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: I've never formally learned to sing, but I'd like to take lessons one day because I want to control my tone and sing my favorite songs with more confidence.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear direct answer and remove hesitations. Avoid repeating the idea of sleeping twice; use one concise supporting detail and a linking word. Also correct the accidental repetition of the examiner's phrase in your reply.

Exemplo: I'd like to sing for my baby brother before he goes to sleep because lullabies usually soothe him and help him fall asleep quickly.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and fix grammatical mistakes (e.g., 'seeing it as' is awkward; 'that instant instantly change' is incorrect). Use one linking phrase and a specific example. Keep it within a couple of sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing brings happiness because it helps release negative emotions. For example, when I'm stressed, singing a favorite song quickly improves my mood.

× I have never been interested to learn singing, but I would like one day to learn how to control my tone so I can sing my favorite songs confidently.

✓ I have never been interested in learning to sing, but I would like one day to learn how to control my tone so I can sing my favorite songs confidently.

The verb 'interested' requires the preposition 'in' followed by a gerund when indicating interest in an activity ('interested in learning'). 'Learn singing' is nonstandard; use 'learn to sing' or 'learn singing', but 'learn to sing' is more natural when followed by 'how to'. Use the gerund 'learning' after 'interested in' for correct structure. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Do you want to sing for? I would like to sing for my baby brother before he sleeps.

✓ Who do you want to sing for? I would like to sing for my baby brother before he sleeps.

The student appears to have misheard or mistyped the question and replied with an incomplete clause 'Do you want to sing for?'. The correct question form is 'Who do you want to sing for?' which asks the target audience. Alternatively, when answering, begin directly with 'I would like to sing to my baby brother before he sleeps.' Using 'sing for' is acceptable, but 'sing to' emphasizes direction. Ensure the question word 'Who' is present in the question and that sentences have proper subject and verb. Grammar problem type ID:26

× To be honest, I don't really like singing. I don't think my voice suits it, although I enjoy listening to music. To be specific, I prefer listening to pop and acrostic songs which make me feel really relaxed.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like singing. I don't think my voice suits it, although I enjoy listening to music. To be specific, I prefer listening to pop and acoustic songs, which make me feel really relaxed.

The word 'acrostic' is likely a wrong word choice; 'acoustic' is the intended adjective for a style of music. Also add a comma before the nonrestrictive relative clause 'which make me feel really relaxed.' Choose correct vocabulary to match meaning. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Of course, seeing it as one of the main reasons people feel happy because it helps them to release their negative emotions.

✓ Of course, I see it as one of the main reasons people feel happy because it helps them release their negative emotions.

The original sentence is a sentence fragment lacking a clear main verb and subject; 'seeing it as' does not function as the main clause here. Recast to 'I see it as' to provide a subject and present-tense verb. Also, 'helps them release' is more natural without 'to'. Ensure sentences have a clear subject and predicate. Grammar problem type ID:6

× For example, when I'm feeling stressed and overwhelmed, I try to sing and that instant instantly change my mood.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed and overwhelmed, I try to sing and that instant instantly changes my mood.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'that instant' is a singular noun and requires the third person singular verb form 'changes' in present tense. Also the phrase 'that instant instantly' is redundant; better: 'that instant changes my mood' or 'it instantly changes my mood.' The corrected sentence keeps present tense matching 'I'm feeling' and 'I try.' 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