Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, actually I don't make a list when I go shopping. I always remember them in my mind. I think it's more convenient.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, sometimes I make a list before I study. I will list out what I should learn today and how to work it. I think it's really effective.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe they will think it's too much and it's not convenient and they thought it was a waste of time so they don't make a list. But for me, I think it will help you work more effectively and organized.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
When I was a kid, I prefer to make a list on the paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list in the phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 你的回答比较自然,但缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议在回答中加入更多具体原因和细节,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to remember the items in my mind. This method is more convenient for me, and it saves time since I don't have to prepare a list beforehand.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 回答较好,但句子结构和用词可以更自然,且缺少连接词。建议使用更地道的表达,并用连接词连接观点和理由。
Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a list before studying. I usually write down what topics I need to cover and plan how to approach them. This strategy is really effective because it helps me stay organized and focused.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词,并注意时态和语法的正确性。
Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it too time-consuming and inconvenient. However, I believe that making lists helps people work more effectively and stay organized.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 78.0Sugestão: 回答内容完整,但时态使用不准确,且句子较长缺少连接词。建议注意时态一致性,使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: When I was a kid, I preferred making lists on paper. However, with the development of technology, I now always make my lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can access them anytime I want.
× When I was a kid, I prefer to make a list on the paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list in the phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
✓ When I was a kid, I preferred to make a list on paper, but now with the development of technology, I always make my list on my phone, which is more convenient and I can take it out anytime I want.
句子中描述过去的习惯动作,应该使用过去时态“preferred”而不是现在时态“prefer”。此外,“on the paper”应改为“on paper”,“in the phone”应改为“on my phone”,因为通常说“on paper”和“on phone”。