List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“adjust buying things on a whim”应为“and buy things on a whim”，以及重复使用“make”。建议注意句子结构的完整性和用词准确性，同时避免重复。

Exemplo: Most of the time, I don't make a list and buy things on a whim. However, when I am preparing for something important like a trip, I definitely make a list to feel organized and ensure everything is ready.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“With less”不明确，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work. I always use my calendar to write down important tasks with deadlines. This way, I can ensure I finish my work on time and never miss anything important. This method is really helpful.

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，如“making this seem more serious”应为“making it seem more serious”，建议注意主谓一致和时态使用，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。

Exemplo: I think making lists can seem more serious to some people. Especially when the list is long, they may feel stressed and worry about whether they can complete everything on time.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅，如“productivity like apps like”重复且不准确，建议简化表达并注意语法，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Usually, I make lists on my phone. There are productivity apps like To Do List or reminders. By making lists, I can keep everything under control and never miss anything important.

× Most of the time I don't make a list adjust buying things on a whim, but when I trying to prepare for something important like a trip, I definitely make a list that can make me feel organized and make make sure everything is ready.

✓ Most of the time I don't make a list and just buy things on a whim, but when I am trying to prepare for something important like a trip, I definitely make a list that helps me feel organized and makes sure everything is ready.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词，动词形式错误。应添加连词“and”，动词“trying”前加助动词“am”，并调整后半句使表达更清晰。

× but when I trying to prepare for something important like a trip, I definitely make a list that can make me feel organized and make make sure everything is ready.

✓ but when I am trying to prepare for something important like a trip, I definitely make a list that helps me feel organized and makes sure everything is ready.

动词“trying”作为现在分词，前面应有助动词“am”构成现在进行时。

× Yes I definitely. I always use my calendar writing important thing with deadline.

✓ Yes, I definitely do. I always use my calendar to write important things with deadlines.

句子缺少谓语动词，且“writing”用法不当，应使用不定式“to write”表示目的。

× I always use my calendar writing important thing with deadline.

✓ I always use my calendar to write important things with deadlines.

“thing”应为复数“things”，“deadline”应为复数“deadlines”，因为通常有多个事项和多个截止日期。

× With less I can make sure I just finish my work on time and never missing anything important.

✓ With this, I can make sure I finish my work on time and never miss anything important.

“With less”表达不清，应改为“With this”；“just finish”中“just”位置不当；“never missing”应改为动词原形“never miss”。

× I think making this seem more serious, especially when some people got a long list, they may feel stressed and just worry about if they can get everything done in time.

✓ I think making this seems more serious, especially when some people have a long list; they may feel stressed and just worry about whether they can get everything done in time.

“making this seem”主语单数，谓语应为“seems”；“got”应为“have”；“worry about if”应改为“worry about whether”。

× Usually I make a list on my phone. There are productivity like apps like To Do List or just a reminder.

✓ Usually I make a list on my phone. There are productivity apps like To Do List or just a reminder.

“productivity like apps”中“like”位置错误，应为“productivity apps like...”，即“像To Do List这样的生产力应用”。

× By making a list I can make sure everything in my control and I'm never missing something really important.

✓ By making a list, I can make sure everything is under my control and I never miss something really important.

缺少动词“is”使句子不完整；“I'm never missing”应改为一般现在时“I never miss”，保持时态一致。