List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, используйте связующие слова для логичности. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем объясните причины и добавьте конкретные детали.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me save both time and money. Moreover, having a list keeps me focused and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более чётким и связным. Избегайте повторений и используйте связующие слова для плавности речи. Добавьте конкретные примеры, как список помогает улучшить качество работы.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list in my notebook before submitting any work. This method helps me organize my tasks clearly, which in turn improves the quality of my job.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и более точные слова. Добавьте связующие слова и конкретные причины.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they are often in a hurry after a busy day and lack focus. As a result, they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than planning ahead.

Sugestão: Ответ не завершён и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать полные предложения и связные выражения. Объясните преимущества бумажного списка и недостатки использования телефона.

Exemplo: I prefer to make my lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting due to messages and calls from apps like Instagram or TikTok. Writing on paper helps me stay focused.

× I prefer to write list of products uh, when I go to supermarket or shop because it assists uh, to uh, save my money and time and uh, get, uh, focus on this on this uh.

✓ I prefer to write a list of products uh, when I go to the supermarket or shop because it assists uh, to uh, save my money and time and uh, get, uh, focus on this on this uh.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'supermarket' is a singular countable noun and needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Using articles correctly is essential for grammatical accuracy.

× before, before I submit something, I tried to note all of things to my notebook because it it helped, it helps to enhance it, enhance my quality of my job.

✓ Before I submit something, I try to note all the things in my notebook because it helps to enhance the quality of my job.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly and uses 'tried' instead of 'try' to express a habitual action. Also, 'note all of things' is incorrect; it should be 'note all the things'. The modal verb 'helps' is used correctly in present tense to indicate general truth.

× people don't write least when in when they hurry up after busy day and maybe don't have a focus and just blunt everything.

✓ People don't write lists when they hurry up after a busy day and maybe don't have focus and just blur everything.

The word 'least' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'busy day' needs the article 'a'. The phrase 'don't have a focus' is better as 'don't have focus' or 'lack focus'. 'Blunt everything' is incorrect; 'blur everything' fits better to express lack of clarity.

× I tried to write a list on my own paper because using phone has interrupted things such as messages or calls.

✓ I try to write a list on my own paper because using the phone interrupts things such as messages or calls.

The verb tense should be present 'try' to match habitual action. 'Using phone' requires the definite article 'the' before 'phone'. 'Has interrupted' is incorrect here; simple present 'interrupts' is better to express general truth. Also, 'on my own paper' is acceptable but could be 'on paper' for naturalness.