List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves me from making extra trips.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide a specific example to support your point.

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for work because they help me stay organized, especially during busy times. For example, last week I used a list to manage my tasks and met all my deadlines efficiently.

Sugestão: Good explanation with reasons. To improve, try to combine your ideas using linking words and avoid short, choppy sentences. Also, use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they have excellent memories and don't find them necessary. Additionally, making lists can feel restrictive, so they prefer to stay flexible and spontaneous.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and fluent. Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, whereas paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten at home.

× I find it's really practical to make a list before going to shopping because mostly when I go to shopping without making a list, I forget some things I need to buy and then I have to go again to the market to buy the things I forget.

✓ I find it's really practical to make a list before going shopping because mostly when I go shopping without making a list, I forget some things I need to buy and then I have to go again to the market to buy the things I forgot.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an activity and does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'go shopping'. Also, 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past action.

× I find it's really practical to make a list before going to shopping because mostly when I go to shopping without making a list, I forget some things I need to buy and then I have to go again to the market to buy the things I forget.

✓ I find it's really practical to make a list before going shopping because mostly when I go shopping without making a list, I forget some things I need to buy and then I have to go again to the market to buy the things I forgot.

The verb 'forget' refers to a past event, so it should be in the past tense 'forgot' to correctly indicate that the forgetting happened before the second trip to the market.

× I generally prefer to make the list on my phone since I always have my phone with me. Umm when I make the list on paper, sometimes I may forget the paper somewhere in my home or to the places I go.

✓ I generally prefer to make the list on my phone since I always have my phone with me. Umm when I make the list on paper, sometimes I may forget the paper somewhere in my home or in the places I go.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition to indicate location is 'in', as in 'in the places I go'. 'To' indicates direction, which does not fit here.