List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, such as 'make list' should be 'make a list'.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping for groceries because it helps me remember what to buy and saves time. For example, last week I quickly bought everything I needed without forgetting anything.

Sugestão: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise language. Start with a direct answer, then explain how making lists helps you, using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'make list' to 'make a list' and 'woke up' to 'wake up'.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work and daily tasks because it helps me stay organized. For instance, when I see my tasks written down, I feel motivated to complete them on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, explain that some people find list-making time-consuming and prefer other methods due to their busy schedules.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time. Also, they might have busy routines and feel more comfortable managing tasks mentally.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference and provide specific reasons. For example, mention the convenience and ease of accessing paper lists.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's convenient to carry and check anytime while shopping. For example, I can quickly glance at my paper list without unlocking my phone.

× Yes, when I go to shopping mall to buy some groceries or food, I make list which I buy.

✓ Yes, when I go to the shopping mall to buy some groceries or food, I make a list of what I buy.

The phrase 'go to shopping mall' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shopping mall'. Also, 'make list which I buy' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list of what I buy' to correctly express the idea of listing items purchased.

× Yes, when I go to shopping mall to buy some groceries or food, I make list which I buy.

✓ Yes, when I go to the shopping mall to buy some groceries or food, I make a list of what I buy.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' when mentioned for the first time. Omitting 'a' before 'list' is incorrect.

× It really helps me to buy food or groceries easily.

✓ It really helps me buy food or groceries easily.

The verb 'help' is commonly followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to buy' after 'helps me' is unnecessary and less natural.

× Overall it was very helpful for me.

✓ Overall, it was very helpful to me.

The phrase 'helpful for me' is less common; 'helpful to me' is the standard collocation. Also, a comma after 'Overall' improves sentence clarity.

× Well because of my disturbance routine I make list for my work and my daily routine.

✓ Well, because of my disturbed routine, I make a list for my work and my daily routine.

The adjective 'disturbance' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'disturbed' to describe the routine. Also, 'make list' requires the article 'a list'. Commas improve readability.

× Well because of my disturbance routine I make list for my work and my daily routine.

✓ Well, because of my disturbed routine, I make a list for my work and my daily routine.

The noun 'list' is countable and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× It really helps me a lot because when I see work on this list it really helps me.

✓ It really helps me a lot because when I see work on this list, it really helps me.

A comma after 'list' is needed to separate the clauses for better readability.

× I woke up early and do some routine works.

✓ I wake up early and do some routine work.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'wake up' is appropriate instead of past tense 'woke up'. Also, 'works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable in this context.

× The peoples who don't like to making list, the reason was that it is a lot of time as wasted and because of their busy routine they don't make at least and they feel comfortable to make this.

✓ The people who don't like making lists do so because it wastes a lot of time, and due to their busy routines, they don't make them, and they feel comfortable not making lists.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'. 'A lot of time as wasted' is incorrect; it should be 'it wastes a lot of time'. 'Don't make at least' is unclear; corrected to 'don't make them'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on paper because it is very convenient and helpful way for us when we go to buy some groceries or food, we see the list at any time at any place and it remembered what who to buy.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on paper because it is a very convenient and helpful way for us. When we go to buy some groceries or food, we can see the list at any time and any place, and it reminds us what to buy.

Added 'a' before 'very convenient'. The sentence was run-on and unclear; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. 'Remembered' is past tense; 'reminds' is correct present tense. 'What who to buy' is incorrect; corrected to 'what to buy'.

× We also prefer to all.

✓ We also prefer that as well.

The phrase 'prefer to all' is incorrect and unclear. It is corrected to 'prefer that as well' to express agreement or preference clearly.