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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

No, actually I don't have a habit of making list before I go in to the supermarket. If I go there, I would just pick out, pick up whatever I want to buy, maybe find something attractive. Me, I will buy it immediately.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I do have a habit of making list of every day tasks that in my life I can not live without making this about what I will do in the future. I think it really works very well.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

I think it mainly because they don't have this habit of making any list and some plans for their future. They just want to be more free for their daily works. They are the people who really pursue freedom in their life.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

To be honest, I use both of ways. I use my phone mainly to record what I will do the next day. I mean I will choose the most important things to record on my phone and the other things I will record on paper.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 你的回答有些重复且表达不够自然,建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,同时注意语法,如冠词的使用。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述购物习惯。

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. When I go to the supermarket, I just pick up whatever catches my eye and buy it immediately.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答中句子结构较复杂且有语法错误,建议简化表达,直接回答问题并用具体细节支持,同时注意时态和冠词的正确使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list of my daily tasks. It helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答内容较好,但表达稍显笨拙,建议使用更自然的连接词和表达方式,使句子更流畅,同时注意单复数和词汇搭配。

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be more flexible in their daily tasks. They value freedom and don't want to be restricted by plans.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答较完整,但表达可以更简洁自然。建议减少重复,使用更地道的表达方式,并注意介词和词汇搭配。

Exemplo: Honestly, I use both methods. I usually record important tasks on my phone and write less important ones on paper.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× No, actually I don't have a habit of making list before I go in to the supermarket.

No, actually I don't have a habit of making a list before I go into the supermarket.

这里的“list”是可数名词,表示“清单”,需要加冠词“a”。另外,“go in to”应合并为“go into”,表示“进入”。建议记住可数名词单数形式前通常需要冠词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× No, actually I don't have a habit of making list before I go in to the supermarket.

No, actually I don't have a habit of making a list before I go into the supermarket.

“go in to”应写作“go into”,表示“进入某地”。这是固定搭配,注意区分“in to”和“into”的用法。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I do have a habit of making list of every day tasks that in my life I can not live without making this about what I will do in the future.

Yes, I do have a habit of making lists of everyday tasks that in my life I cannot live without, making this about what I will do in the future.

“list”应为复数“lists”,因为后面提到的是“everyday tasks”,表示多个任务。注意可数名词复数形式的使用。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I do have a habit of making list of every day tasks that in my life I can not live without making this about what I will do in the future.

Yes, I do have a habit of making lists of everyday tasks that in my life I cannot live without, making this about what I will do in the future.

“making list of every day tasks”中“every day”应合写为“everyday”,表示“日常的”;另外“making this about what I will do in the future”结构不清晰,建议调整句子结构。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think it mainly because they don't have this habit of making any list and some plans for their future.

I think it is mainly because they don't have the habit of making any lists or plans for their future.

“making any list and some plans”中“list”应为复数“lists”,且“and”连接的两个名词应保持一致形式。

Singular and plural issue

× I think it mainly because they don't have this habit of making any list and some plans for their future.

I think it is mainly because they don't have the habit of making any lists or plans for their future.

“list”应为复数“lists”,因为这里指的是多个清单。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× They just want to be more free for their daily works.

They just want to be freer in their daily work.

“free”比较级为“freer”,且“work”作为不可数名词表示“工作”,不加复数。介词应为“in”,表示“在……方面”。

Singular and plural issue

× They just want to be more free for their daily works.

They just want to be freer in their daily work.

“works”在这里应为不可数名词“work”,表示“工作”,不加复数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× To be honest, I use both of ways.

To be honest, I use both ways.

“both”后面直接加复数名词,不需要“of”。“both of”后面通常接代词。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I use my phone mainly to record what I will do the next day.

I mainly use my phone to record what I will do the next day.

副词“mainly”位置更自然放在动词前。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I mean I will choose the most important things to record on my phone and the other things I will record on paper.

I mean I will choose the most important things to record on my phone, and the other things I will record on paper.

句子中缺少逗号,连接两个并列句时应加逗号。

Vocabulário

AttractiveAppealing; Good-looking
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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