Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I'm this kind of people who like to make lists and make sure that everything is under control. So I have to make lists before I go shopping.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, definitely. I have a lot of to dos in my work so I have to list all the things in the morning and prioritize the most important part. I think it quite works well because it helps me to make sure the priority.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think it's probably because they just want to enjoy the moment. Moreover, uh, maybe they have the key tasks in their mind so they don't have to make a real list, but they they know what their prioritize what they should prioritize.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make it on my so that I can carry it anywhere and it is quite convenient for me to type it on my cell phone and I will use it at any time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅,避免重复和语法错误。可以简化句子结构,使表达更地道。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list to stay organized and ensure I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中应注意语法准确性和连贯性,使用连接词使句子更流畅,同时避免重复表达。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to prioritize my tasks, which helps me manage my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中应避免口语填充词,注意语法和句子结构,表达更清晰具体。
Exemplo: Some people prefer not to make lists because they want to stay spontaneous, or they remember their main tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中应完整表达观点,避免遗漏词汇,句子结构应更完整,表达更自然。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient to carry and I can access it anytime.
× I'm this kind of people who like to make lists and make sure that everything is under control.
✓ I'm this kind of person who likes to make lists and make sure that everything is under control.
这里的主语是单数形式的"this kind of",所以后面的名词应为单数"person",动词也应与单数主语一致,使用"likes"。
× I have a lot of to dos in my work so I have to list all the things in the morning and prioritize the most important part.
✓ I have a lot of to-dos in my work so I have to list all the things in the morning and prioritize the most important part.
"to dos"应写作复合名词"to-dos",表示多个待办事项,符合复数形式。
× I think it quite works well because it helps me to make sure the priority.
✓ I think it works quite well because it helps me to make sure the priority.
副词"quite"应放在动词"works"之前,正确的副词位置是修饰动词时放在动词前。
× but they they know what their prioritize what they should prioritize.
✓ but they know what they should prioritize.
句子中"their prioritize"结构错误,应去掉多余部分,简化为"they know what they should prioritize"。
× I prefer to make it on my so that I can carry it anywhere and it is quite convenient for me to type it on my cell phone and I will use it at any time.
✓ I prefer to make it on my phone so that I can carry it anywhere, and it is quite convenient for me to type it on my cell phone and use it at any time.
句子缺少"phone"一词,导致结构不完整;另外,连接词"and"前应加逗号,保持句子流畅。