List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there is a vocabulary misuse with the word "impasse" which should be replaced with a more appropriate term like "impulse". Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly and using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Absolutely. I almost always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and avoid buying things on impulse. With a clear list, I can get in and out of the store quickly without wandering around or forgetting anything essential.

Sugestão: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors such as "A to do list" (should be "a to-do list") and "keeps my accountable" (should be "keeps me accountable"). Also, adding linking words like "because" or "which" can improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I rely on a to-do list to structure my day because it keeps me accountable and ensures I don't overlook any important tasks. Crossing items off the list gives me a sense of progress and productivity, which keeps me motivated.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear phrases such as "Others may simplify this, making time consuming" which affects clarity. Try to use clearer expressions and provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by them and prefer to work more spontaneously rather than following a rigid plan. Others might find list-making time-consuming or believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains missing words such as "using my" (phone) and "paperless have a certain charm" (should be "paper lists have a certain charm"). Make sure to complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer using my phone because it's more convenient; I can update the list anytime and anywhere, and it automatically syncs across my devices. Plus, digital lists help me set reminders and priorities, which makes it much easier to stay organized. That said, I do think paper lists have a certain charm, but in terms of efficiency and practicality, I prefer digital ones.

× I almost always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and avoid buying things on impasse.

✓ I almost always make a shopping list because it helps me stay focused and avoid buying things on impulse.

The phrase 'on impasse' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'on impulse,' which means acting without planning or thought. 'Impasse' means a deadlock or stalemate, which does not fit the context here.

× I rely on A to do list to structure my day.

✓ I rely on a to-do list to structure my day.

The phrase 'A to do list' is incorrect because 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' and the article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. Also, 'to do list' is a noun phrase and needs hyphenation to be correct.

× it keeps my accountable and ensures I don't overlook any important tasks.

✓ it keeps me accountable and ensures I don't overlook any important tasks.

The pronoun 'my' is incorrect here; the correct object pronoun is 'me' because it is the object of the verb 'keeps.'

× Others may simplify this, making time consuming or believe they can remember everything without writing it out.

✓ Others may find it time-consuming or believe they can remember everything without writing it out.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. 'Simplify this, making time consuming' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely that others find making lists time-consuming. The correction clarifies this with proper verb usage and structure.

× I definitely prefer using my.

✓ I definitely prefer using my phone.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object after 'my.' Adding 'phone' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× That said, I do think paperless have a certain charm, but in terms of efficiency and practicality, my.

✓ That said, I do think paper lists have a certain charm, but in terms of efficiency and practicality, my phone is better.

The phrase 'paperless' is incorrect here; it should be 'paper lists' or 'paper ones.' Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'my,' which is incomplete. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the comparison.