List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say 'No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously, depending on what I need at the moment.'

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to buy things spontaneously, depending on what I need at the moment.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence and explain your reasons logically with linking words. Avoid informal or unclear phrases. For example, 'I try to make lists for my work and schedule tasks, but they often don't work well because I tend to procrastinate.'

Exemplo: I try to make lists for my work and schedule tasks, but they often don't work well because I tend to procrastinate.

Sugestão: Your answer is vague and contains unclear phrases. Provide a clear reason with supporting details using linking words. For example, 'Some people dislike making lists because they find the process complicated and difficult to follow, which discourages them from using lists.'

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process complicated and difficult to follow, which discourages them from using lists.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is affected by unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Use clear sentences with linking words to explain your preference. For example, 'I prefer making lists on paper because handwriting helps me remember tasks better, and it is also useful for managing my time effectively.'

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because handwriting helps me remember tasks better, and it is also useful for managing my time effectively.

× No, I don't make this when I shop because I think make this is a disturbing decision while influence my decision and I like to buy things.

✓ No, I don't make this when I shop because I think making this is a disturbing decision while influencing my decision and I like to buy things.

The verbs 'make' and 'influence' should be in the present participle form 'making' and 'influencing' to correctly function as gerunds in this context, indicating ongoing actions or processes.

× Umm, depends on what I look looked.

✓ Umm, depends on what I look at.

The phrase 'look looked' is incorrect; the correct present tense phrase is 'look at' to indicate the object of attention. Using 'looked' (past tense) here is inappropriate as the sentence refers to a general habit or preference.

× He's like you should make a list for my work and I will schedule it, but none of them will work because I I am a lazy person.

✓ He says I should make a list for my work and I will schedule it, but none of them works because I am a lazy person.

The pronoun 'He's like' is informal and incorrect here; 'He says' is appropriate. Also, 'none of them will work' should be 'none of them works' to agree with the singular subject 'none' when referring to things collectively. The repeated 'I' is a typographical error.

× The call may be making. This is complex and not that easy to follow, so many people won't make this.

✓ The call may be making this complex and not that easy to follow, so many people won't make this.

The sentence is fragmented; 'The call may be making' is incomplete. Adding 'this complex' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'won't make this' is unclear; it likely means 'won't make lists' or 'won't do this' but is kept as is to maintain original meaning.

× I have a preference to make things on paper, especially at least umm.

✓ I have a preference for making things on paper, especially at least umm.

The phrase 'preference to make' should be 'preference for making' to correctly use the preposition with 'preference' and the gerund form of the verb.

× I think the feeling of handwriting seems well better and help me to re remember what things should I do and also it's a good way to for your time management when you're looking at.

✓ I think the feeling of handwriting seems much better and helps me to remember what things I should do, and also it's a good way for your time management when you're looking at it.

'Well better' is incorrect; 'much better' is the correct adverbial phrase. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'feeling'. 'Re remember' is a typo and should be 'remember'. The phrase 'what things should I do' should be 'what things I should do' for correct word order in indirect questions. 'To for your time management' is corrected to 'for your time management'. Added 'it' at the end for clarity.