List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence flow. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and reduce repetitive phrases like 'things that I need to buy to purchase.'

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop, especially at markets with many items. This helps me avoid forgetting important things. As I add items to my cart, I cross them off the list and continue shopping efficiently.

Sugestão: Your response is relevant and structured, but filler words like 'umm' reduce fluency. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence, such as 'because' instead of ''cause' and 'stay on track' instead of 'keep everything on my track.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make a weekly list detailing tasks for each day. This works well because it helps me avoid forgetting important duties and stay on track. Essentially, it serves as a roadmap to complete my work efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to clarify your ideas and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your reasoning more logical and concise.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility. Since their schedules often change, they find it more important to adapt quickly rather than follow a fixed list.

Sugestão: Your answer contains some unclear phrases and filler words that affect clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary fillers. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: I've tried both methods for work. Phone notifications remind me about classes 30 minutes in advance, which helps me prepare and feel motivated. However, for personal tasks, I prefer writing lists on paper.

× So whenever I put a thing in the cart, I'm gonna cross that item down and then just continue my shopping.

✓ So whenever I put a thing in the cart, I'm going to cross that item off and then just continue my shopping.

The phrase 'cross that item down' is incorrect. The correct phrasal verb is 'cross off,' which means to mark something as completed or removed from a list. Also, 'gonna' is informal; 'going to' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× Yes I do and umm, every week I have a list of things that I do on which day.

✓ Yes, I do, and every week I have a list of things that I do on each day.

The phrase 'on which day' is awkward and incorrect here. 'On each day' is clearer and grammatically correct to express the idea of tasks assigned to specific days.

× So this really works for me 'cause I can avoid forgetting important tasks as well as umm keep everything on my track.

✓ So this really works for me because I can avoid forgetting important tasks as well as keep everything on track.

The phrase 'on my track' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'on track,' which means to stay organized or on schedule. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for clarity.

× So it's really important for them to, it's not important for them to make lists of things to do that is important for them to be flexible enough to adapt to changes.

✓ So it's not important for them to make lists of things to do; what is important for them is to be flexible enough to adapt to changes.

The original sentence is confusing and has incorrect conjunction use. The correction clarifies the contrast between making lists and being flexible, using proper conjunctions and sentence structure.

× I've tried both afford my work.

✓ I've tried both for my work.

The phrase 'both afford my work' is incorrect. It should be 'both for my work' to indicate trying both methods or tools related to work. 'Both' requires a clear reference, and 'afford' is misused here.

× My notifications on my phone works really well.

✓ My notifications on my phone work really well.

The subject 'notifications' is plural, so the verb should be 'work' instead of 'works' to agree in number.