List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing phrases. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with simple, relevant details. Avoid unnecessary words and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I think making a list can help people remember what they need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Your answer partially addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, avoid vague phrases and incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. However, when I have many tasks, it can be difficult to include everything, so sometimes I still forget some important duties.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people dislike making lists, using simple and relevant vocabulary. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer to be spontaneous and not follow a strict plan, which can feel stressful to them.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clear vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: In recent years, I have preferred making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This makes it easy and convenient to check my to-do list anytime, so I don't forget important tasks.

× But no, I don't really make a list goodnight when I shop, but I think making this is a very good behaviors are in warmth.

✓ But no, I don't really make a list when I shop, but I think making one is a very good habit.

The phrase 'make a list goodnight' is incorrect; 'goodnight' is misplaced and unnecessary. 'Behaviors are in warmth' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'making one is a very good habit' to express the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Is anything unique? Uh, I didn't really ask about English.

✓ Is there anything unique? Uh, I didn't really understand the question about English.

The sentence 'Is anything unique?' lacks the necessary verb 'there' to form a correct existential question. 'I didn't really ask about English' is likely a misuse of 'ask'; the intended meaning is probably 'understand' or 'know'.

× But yes, I often recognized for my work and that really helped.

✓ But yes, I am often recognized for my work and that really helps.

The verb 'recognized' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the passive voice correctly. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense context.

× But also a level was very busy.

✓ But also, the level was very busy.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'level'; it should be 'the' to specify a particular level. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding a comma improves clarity.

× It was challenging for me to put all my tasks in the list, so I still sometimes forgot some, uh, something I need to complain.

✓ It was challenging for me to put all my tasks on the list, so I sometimes forgot some things I needed to complete.

'In the list' should be 'on the list' as tasks are placed on a list. 'Some, uh, something' is inconsistent; 'some things' is correct plural form. 'I need to complain' is incorrect; likely intended 'I needed to complete' or 'I needed to do'.

× Remind me to tell some people they have a period of freedom.

✓ I remember some people like to have a period of freedom.

'Remind me to tell' is incorrect in this context; the speaker likely means 'I remember' or 'I think'. The sentence needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So when it is to make means that we need to follow a certain structure and you can feel the pressure of daylight.

✓ So when it comes to making lists, it means that we need to follow a certain structure and you can feel the pressure of deadlines.

The phrase 'when it is to make' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when it comes to making'. 'Pressure of daylight' is likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'pressure of deadlines' is more appropriate.

× So without lift, uh, people can walk in the weather.

✓ So without a list, people can act more freely.

'Without lift' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'without list'. 'Walk in the weather' is unclear; the intended meaning is likely 'people can act freely' or 'without restrictions'.

× In recent years, I always make a list on my phone because I find my phone to everywhere most of the time, so it's more easily and accessible for me to check my To Do List if I won't forget to bring my phone and also digital notebook or the do list and uh thing in different.

✓ In recent years, I have always made lists on my phone because I have my phone with me most of the time, so it's easier and more accessible for me to check my To-Do List. I won't forget to bring my phone, unlike a digital notebook or a paper to-do list, which are different.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'make a list on my phone' should be 'made lists on my phone' to match present perfect tense. 'Find my phone to everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'have my phone with me everywhere'. 'More easily' should be 'easier'. The sentence is run-on and unclear; breaking it into parts improves clarity. 'If I won't forget' should be 'I won't forget'. 'Digital notebook or the do list and uh thing in different' is unclear; rephrased for clarity.