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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

No I don't but usually I will go to shop if my mom request me and usually I will bring a list with me because I don't know what what she wanted.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I do make this for my study because I tend to forget things if there's tons of waiting lists, so I would usually like get the list so that I can remember and won't forget the important things.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

I would say because making this can be stressful because if you write down all the things you have to do, you may feel some pressures on it, but if you didn't write it, you can just forget it and let it go.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I used to did it on paper but nowadays I use phone because phone is more convenient and also easy to carry with. But with paper you need to get another things called pen and that's too much.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 答题要更直接、简洁,并注意语法和连贯。可以先给出主题句(Yes/No and brief reason),然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意动词时态和单复数,避免重复词(如“what what”)。使用连接词如“so”或“because”。

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list for myself. But when I go with my mum, I often bring her list because she tells me what to buy. This helps me avoid buying the wrong items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答应先直接回应问题,然后提供具体理由和效果说明。修正词汇和短语错误(如“waiting lists”应为“things to do”或“tasks”),注意句子简练,最多5句。使用衔接词如“because”及“so”来增加逻辑。

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list for my studies and it works well. Because I often forget tasks, I write them down in order of priority so I can focus on the most important assignments first.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答要简洁并避免重复“because”。给出一两个明确原因并可用例子或结果支持。注意语法(如“feel some pressures”应为“feel pressured”),减少冗长从句,用连接词如“however”对比观点。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because seeing all their tasks at once can make them feel pressured. However, others avoid lists to reduce stress and prefer to handle things spontaneously.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 先给出偏好并说明原因,注意动词形式(应为“used to do”)和名词单复数(“another things”应为“another thing”或“extra items”)。用一两句具体对比优缺点,保持简洁。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone now because it's more convenient and I always have it with me. Paper lists are useful sometimes, but they need a pen and are easy to lose.

Gramática

Third person singular issue

× No I don't but usually I will go to shop if my mom request me and usually I will bring a list with me because I don't know what what she wanted.

No, I don't, but usually I will go shopping if my mom requests me, and I usually bring a list with me because I don't know what she wants.

错误原因:句子中主语是第三人称单数(my mom),动词应使用第三人称单数形式(requests)。另外时态和动词形式不一致:go to shop 应改为 go shopping;what what 重复并且与主句时态一致应为 what she wants(现在时)。建议:注意主语和动词在现在时的主谓一致;使用固定短语 go shopping。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I do make this for my study because I tend to forget things if there's tons of waiting lists, so I would usually like get the list so that I can remember and won't forget the important things.

Yes, I do make them for my studies because I tend to forget things if there are tons of items on the waiting list, so I usually get the list so that I can remember and not forget important things.

错误原因:介词和名词短语使用不当:make this for my study 应改为 make them for my studies(复数/习惯表达);there's tons of waiting lists 使用了缩写单数 there’s 与复数不一致,应为 there are tons of items on the waiting list 或 there are many items on the waiting lists;like get 不需要 like,这里直接用usually get 更自然;won't forget 与 not forget 二选一且保持形式一致。建议:注意 there is/are 的主谓一致,选择合适的介词短语(on the list, for my studies)。

Present tense issue

× I would say because making this can be stressful because if you write down all the things you have to do, you may feel some pressures on it, but if you didn't write it, you can just forget it and let it go.

I would say making a list can be stressful because if you write down all the things you have to do, you may feel some pressure, but if you don't write it down, you can just forget it and let it go.

错误原因:时态和动词形式混用:句中 if you didn't write it 使用了过去时,但与条件句上下文不一致,应使用现在时 if you don't write it down。pressures 用法不当,通常用不可数名词 pressure。还需补全动词短语 write down。建议:条件句保持与事实可能性一致的现在时,注意可数/不可数名词使用。

Past tense issue

× I used to did it on paper but nowadays I use phone because phone is more convenient and also easy to carry with.

I used to do it on paper, but nowadays I use my phone because the phone is more convenient and also easy to carry.

错误原因:used to 后应接动词原形(do),不能用过去式 did。缺少所指代的限定词 my phone 或 the phone;短语 carry with 结构错误,应为 easy to carry 或 easy to carry with you(若保留 with 表示随身携带)。建议:记住 used to 后面接动词原形,使用合适的限定词与固定搭配。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× But with paper you need to get another things called pen and that's too much.

But with paper you need to get other things like a pen, and that's too much.

错误原因:another things 是错误搭配,another 用于单数,things 为复数,应使用 other things 或 something else;called pen 表达不自然,应使用 like a pen 或 such as a pen;同时可加逗号连接。建议:注意 another 与复数不搭配,选择 other things 或 a different thing,并用 like/such as 举例。

Vocabulário

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ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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